draxian contradictions

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By Iðunn

rob! on flickr
rob! on flickr

never is too long to wait, friend.

yes echoes achingly in the empty corridor that is never.

 

you ask if I will be there as you need and when

"yes," I say.

"but I will never need you," you say.

 

you ask if it is you and only you I'll love then

"yes," I say.

"but I will never find that time with you," you say.

 

you ask if I will be your friend, companion, lover

"yes," I say.

"but I will never want you," you say.

 

you ask me whether I will be all those and others

"yes," I say.

but I will be those things for another.

 

never is too long to wait, friend.

yes-echoes linger...

longingly,

lonely,

lost

in the empty corridor that is never

as I step out of the dark cool hallway

of draxian contradictions

into the sunlit warmth

of a bright Texas day.

 

20Nov07

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STR8 KRAZIE  says:
6 months ago

good job sweety another wonderful work of art

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Froggy213  says:
6 months ago

Another great one my dear friend--I just love your poems..

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

thank you, str8 and Froggy! So good to see you! How are you?

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Gypsy Willow  says:
6 months ago

Enjoy your poetry

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

gypsy, thank you for taking time to comment. I plan to browse your Hubs as well. :)

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Mighty Mom  says:
6 months ago

A lovely jewel of a find for me. I'm so glad I followed Froggy over here. Very nice poem. MM

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

froggy is truly a wonderful man. we go back a ways on here. thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

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Froggy213  says:
6 months ago

I am hanging tuff--how have you been?

I missed you dearly.

Mighty Mom, you have just met one of the greatest poets of our time :)))

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

I'm glad you are doing well. I'm my usual insomniac happy self, thanks for asking. I've been writing a lot (as you can see) and back from my long long sabbatical, finally. I'm so glad to see you still here, hanging tuff as you say, and you sound really really good. God bless you. :)

Thanks for the compliments. Surely I'm unworthy of all that but it delights me to my toes that you would say so. Thank you.

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ethel smith  says:
6 months ago

Lovely

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

Thank you for stopping in, ethel~

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quietnessandtrust  says:
6 months ago

hey ther how are ya?....great poem.....never is toooooo long to wiat.

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

heya, quiet, so glad you dropped in to comment. I've been here, youi've been missing, silly!

Blackngoldbanana  says:
6 months ago

Have you been looking into my life? That is exactly how our unspoken dialogue goes...still we keep speaking. It hurts to continue, but it would kill me to stop, ya know?

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Iðunn  says:
6 months ago

yes, I do know. tough stuff, love. and it still lingers, even after you think you're past it.

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