A Poem From Ron Price Australia
50A Poem From Ron Price in Australia
THE ELUSIVE PURITY
The souls that form the great rose of Paradise are seated in banks and tiers of ascending blessedness...they are all perfectly happy; they are all pure...purged of moral taint...Poetry wants to be pure, but poems do not...The poems want to give us poetry which is pure, and the elements of a poem...will work together toward that end, but many of the elements, taken in themselves, may actually seem to contradict that end, or be neutral...They mar themselves with cacophonies, jagged rhythms, ugly words...all things which call us back to the world of prose and imperfection. -Robert Penn Warren in A Robert Penn Warren Reader, Random House, NY, 1987,p.174.
...poetry has for its object an indefinite sense of a definite pleasure...poetry is not supposed to undergo close inspection, only a cursory glance...poetry is a beautiful painting whose tints, to minute inspection, are confusion worse confounded, but start out boldly to the cursory glance of the connoisseur...aspires to music...indefinite sensations...melancholy is the most poetical effect...pure poetry is the pure effort to heighten consciousness. -Robert Penn Warren, ibid., p.185.
Where is no special wisdom here:
perhaps some irony, some dramatic
structure while the saint steps into
the fire, the philosopher writes some
enormous tome, the poet makes
simple affirmations and diversions,
philosophical titbits enter unobtrusively
into the poetry as it enters into the reader
with a net of connections, an echo
of crude experience, an attenuation,
a rehandling of theory and practice.
Perhaps there is knowledge here
and love, like some footless dance,
like some fluent crystal that flies
and glitters, like criers in a multitude
of tongues, often like music. I try to
put them where they are, here, where
you see them, in our imagination.
I give them many names, clear on
the attendance roll, but they seem elusive.
Ron Price
5 October 1995
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RonPrice says:
4 months ago
The first line above which reads: "Where is no special wisdom here," should read "There is....." While here I will add a few more words on the subject of poetry.-Ron in Tasmania
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I often make alterations to individual poems but, in the 30 years that I have been keeping poems, some 6500 in total, I made no changes to most of my poems. No change was made to most poems after they were typed and printed. Perhaps what I do, in the end, is adhere to Robert Duncan’s approach: ‘I never revise a poem; I simply write a new one.’ I’ve always liked W.B. Yeats’ statement on revision: ‘know what issue is at stake/It is myself that I remake.’ If I analyse this question of revision I note that there are many permuations and combinations in regard to what actually happens when I revise a poem. At the age of 65, 50 years through my Baha’i life, I am at the two-thirds point, should I live to be 90. I can only watch, wait and see what policy evolves with respect to this business of revision. For now this brief statement will suffice.-Ron in Australia