i breathe in you
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i breathe in you
Your love has me suspended in
Timeless seas, traced and embraced
Breath, riveted by
Your tenderness has me falling before
I brace, for passions fever has
Ruptured this place, radiant under the night sky
Passion purified within your eyes has
Capsized my soul in steadfast fashion
Sensually drenched in serendipitous pool
Aimlessly I've wandered, running from truth
Yet only to find puddled once again
Your embrace
Close your eyes, feel the fury
As I grace your being
Melted together
Enmeshed
Moist, supple
Placid
Complete
For I breathe as you
Breathe, I feel as you
Feel
This love so divine
It is so real.
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Thank you, zampano! I am back! :)
Hugs back!
Beautiful and sesnsual poem, Invictus!
Thank you, Jess Killmenow! :)
This is very nice Invictus. I like it very much especially this line:
"Raptured this place, radiant under the night sky"
Thank you, wesley! I feel radiance pulsating within me! :)
I love it when you use water imagery. :) Yummy.
Thank you, Randy! :) Liquid images best describe...you know!
My body temperature rose like ten degrees just reading this! Good (hot) stuff!
So glad you're back - this was well worth waiting for to read. Absolutely dynamic; sensual and captivating!!! I say Bravo & keep up the great work - sincerely impressed.
Oh dohn, your reaction gives me a great big smile! Thank you! :) I hear patience is a virtue... aand love prevails! Ahhh, I truly believe embers burn through all tides!
Denizee ~ Thank you sooo much for always showering me with such beautiful sincerity! It warms me and feeds my inspiration! :) You are so lovely!
After reading this breathless prose, and leaving me breathing deeply, I noticed an ad on your border claiming deep breathing for weight loss...I wonder how much I shed reading this...Thanks, Larry
Thank you so much, mavern, for your lovely comment! The adds on the page are funny! ha ha ... some are for curring bad breath! :)
ahhhhhhhh my nick name is radiant....... i like your writing, nice to have you back, keep keeeping on
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... lolol So happy to see you about!
Psst. ~ your bro has a new one out as well! ;)
wowee it is my night..... you are brilliant, i will get writing when i get back, my inspiration,,,
Have a lovely weekend! :)
thanks, and you, loved the song, never heard it before.... get to the gym if you can
Ahhhh, the song... I knicked it from Little Whistle! Mha ha ha!
:)
i saw little whistle was around again........ ha ha, really going tearing myself away,,,,,,,,,,,
Gorgeously breathless . .absolutely this one takes my breathe away . .and I think right now I need to come up for some air!
"for passions fever has ruptured this place". I'm surprised that didn't burn up the screen! Thank you.
Just beautiful.:) Thanks. God Bless.
Yes, Poet... get on your holiday already! ha ha :)
wavegirl22~ Ahhh, so appreciate your reaction! Thank you! :)
Fightkeeper ~ THANK YOU so much! Can you imagine how I feel? It is lovely...:)
kiera7 ~ Awww, Thank you! Your avatar is so precious! :)
Love and light!
what are you doing to all these people..... keep writing, and smiling..... speak soon
Oooo... maybe I'll find a love! :O)
Aren't you meant to be on holiday??? ;)
i hope you find whatever you want.... should be going now...... just can't tear myself away...... if you do find a love, i will have to vet her for you
LOL ~ too funny :) What does to 'vet' mean??
Have a lovely time!
Oooo, luv, luv, luv. so boutiful ur luv. x
What an amazing portrayal of passion! I am fully aware of the impulses of lust, but I can only hope to someday know this understanding of true ecstasy!
Thanks for the lovely words, Ivana B WithUnow! :)
aim4strz ~ Thank you! It is quite amazing, indeed! I wish you all the ecstasy you can bear! :)
Love & Light...
What a lovely and sensual poem!
Thank you so much, jill of alltrades! :)
sigh--I could only dream of such passions! I do not know what it is like anymore--to breathe in someone...but I do not miss the pain it can cause! Such mastery of passions, you are an awesome poet, i*n*v*i*c*t*u*s.
to vet means to give them a once over to make sure i approve......
i am liking this one too..... very steamy where did you say you lived....
AIDY ~ I so love your comments and from reading all your works, I know you know this feeling! To dream is to visualize and what we visualize we create, is how I feel. :) Of course, there is always the flipside, but we can always choose, eh? Thank you for such praise of my works. =D
Poet ~ Ahhh, thank you for having my back! :)
Thank you, glad you enjoyed... don't you think it is a bit soon to ask where I live. It could be a, Miss Take!! ;)
This is fantastic! The pictures fit so well, but the words are so perfect I think I would see those pictures even if they were not there...very well done!
eyeofh ~ Thank you so very much! :) I am oozing with feeling and vibrancy at the moment! Ahhhh...
i love them all but i breathe in you took me deep
he he he, roghut, me too! I so appreciate you... you've hit my 2 favorites to date... Thank you! :)
starting to get around this place a little beter having some fun for a change
:) awesome... it only gets better, it is am amazing place. So happy to here! :)
WOW. This is soooo deep! Absolutely love it! U definitely have a way of sweeping one off their feet with ur words! B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!
thanglynn, Thank you so very much! I have never been told that before and it feels lovely! :) So very grateful you shared.
Steamy and romantic!
Peggy W ~ Ahhhhh, thanks for saying so! :D
LOVED this one! Keep up the good work!!!
brandonfan ~ Thank you, comments like yours keep my fire burning! :)
how did i get here, just thought i would listened to this song.....
great idea... I'll listen, too! :) Thank you for coming over..
thankyou for the vid, where shall go next.....
not sure. hmmm. who has good music? Sorry for the delay, I am slow... lol :D Oh, how bout Moby ;) whispering...
perfect
I really love your poetry.... very musical. Thank you for the lesson and the inspiration. JM
James ~ Thank you for you lovely comment and for stopping by! :)
gotta go....... soon anyway
alright... thanks for the shout! lol :)
wow this is very beautiful.
i love it. great job.
Thanks so much, fobxlover36! :) Thanks for reading!
very passionate and beautiful!
loved the pics, too ;p
Thank you, blaise! Glad you liked. Thanks for stopping by! :D
zampano says:
3 weeks ago
life giving breath !
big hug to you, first entity I saw when I was born here!