Love is Beautiful and Life God's Gift
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Love is beautiful and life God's gift,
As intertwined as lovers' embrace.
Deprived of love, life is cast adrift
Upon listless seas whose lonely face
Vacant stares, realizing silence
Where music should thrill the air. Never
Either shall love be in any sense
Without her dearest lover, ever.
Were it not for life, love could not be.
Blessed then is life, a place for love
To spring into being like a leaf
Bursting forth from every plain faced bud
In springtime. Life and love are sweetness
From God's hand to our being given
Freely without condition. We guess
Vainly at their worth. We are living
Our gifts with each passionate moment
On this lovely world, given precious
Few of them to live out God's intent
That we share these gifts with all of us.
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Ah, well. It's easy to be a critic. A comment space is big enough to write five stanzas of four lines each, rhyme scheme A-B-A-B-C-D-C-D-E-F-E-F-G-H-G-H, each line with nine syllables, on this subject.
Please. Have a go. Show me how it's done. ;)
Are you talking to yourself Tom?
I had approved that guy before, but then he disappeared in a HubMagic kinda way. But he's back now. Maybe he'll come back and out-write me!
Tom,
Please comment on "Love is over rated".
Oh now I see his little baby face. He's kinda cute to be so sarcastic.
Will do, Nazishnasim.
Ya, Randy, all I did was answer this request written in Engrish and look what I get! Cute little booger should show up and write a poem right now!
Nopes Tom, I wanted you to shed some light on the saying,"Love is over-rated".
Ohhh, ok. Will do!
Life is short and you are right we should enjoy them while we can, what a poet you are. :)
Lovely piece of poetry Sir, I really enjoyed the beautiful
lyrics, meter and subject matter. It looks as if you have done some lovely work. I write as well...poetry, that is...how well I write well I suppose is anyone's guess. I stopped by and saw your interest in poetry and had to take a look. Thanks for sharing a wonderful part of yourself.Kindest Regards. John
Thanks for stopping by AEvans!
Thank you, Divinemercylover. I will stop by and have a look at your work too.
i liked this ....... if only i had the time, and i will one day.... to take each line and slowly inwardly digest, as i feel with this poem, that each line is loaded and each line culd be a poem in itself....... very well done i likes it x
I haven't read this in a long time. This is an example of me writing a poem at someone else's request, so I had to work at it. But I like that kind of challenge. I'm glad you like my poem, Brenda!
guess what, i came back to this, just saw it at the side you know advertised,when i was reading another poem..... I could not remember reading it although look it was only 5 weeks ago when i did...
I was interested to see my comments after, as i had time today, i read it slowly, then again then again..... and still have not done it justice. The film much ado about nothing came to mind, and i could hear one of the actresses in that actually reading it, it was sooooo beautiful. Thank you for your hard work, i am writing every day, and learning from other poets on here, and really enjoying my journey..... hopefully one day i may be able to write something of this kind of standard. Thanks again.
pkoson says:
9 months ago
love is beati full and life god gift
I think this hub is the anti-anti-toxin to anxiety! Help, the verbosity of it is making me anxious!