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By Ivana B WithUnow


ur luv

Oooo, ur luv is just like honey, baby


tickled delightful pleasure


as ur loving on my toes


so sticky and so sweet


immersed our bodies become


submerged in ur heavenly throws


luscious and delectable


u sweep me down below


cupped in spoon like fashion


pulsating devilish treats


please know I luv u forever, baby


to u my heart bestowed


melted in ur velvet kiss


hearts enveloped in poem

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 weeks ago

My, my... beautiful start here.

ps. Do I know you?? :) welcome

chrismarva profile image

chrismarva  says:
6 weeks ago

I feel what you feel, need what you need. Good job. Chris

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

I vana thank u so for share my luv. x

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 weeks ago

LOL, you seem to know me darlin'. I love you forever too along with them toes. hehe This is the great beginning of a new hubber I think.

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
6 weeks ago

nice one

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 weeks ago

do you know whom this is, Miss!?

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

Ooo, vell hello darlin', thnks for share my luv x

too all xx

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
6 weeks ago

soooo suits you really really really does

Miss Take profile image

Miss Take  says:
6 weeks ago

this picture looks like the English Patient

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
6 weeks ago

hi this is lovely

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

I vana thank u so for share my luv. x

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 weeks ago

You have a strange accent for one who may be in Bristol. LOL

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

Bristol, vere is dis? x

ralwus profile image

ralwus  says:
6 weeks ago

Haha, OK. I give in. No more guessing on my part you sweet thing you.

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

vell ok then. x

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s  says:
6 weeks ago

Ivana ~ congrats to hitting the page #1 of hot poems.. Great start. :) Look forward to more of you!

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
6 weeks ago

i wonder if this love letter is for anyone particular, is it for you ralwus

Jess Killmenow profile image

Jess Killmenow  says:
6 weeks ago

Nice stuff, heat in freeform. :)

Hmrjmr1 profile image

Hmrjmr1  says:
6 weeks ago

I join in the praise great start!

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
6 weeks ago

I vava thnk u all fur ur share in my luv, so vonder vil xx

heat is so ver ver in free in luv, jess killmenow xx

I vana luv praise, hmrjmr1 x

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ralwus  says:
6 weeks ago

poetlorraine, I don't know, she spoke of 'your loving on my toes so sticky and so sweet', so it made me wonder too. LOL I don't know Ivana but wish I did now. I love you Ivana. Yes I do. You are off to a wonderful start.

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
5 weeks ago

I vana luvs u too! xx

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
5 weeks ago

ralwus she is such a caution. What a puzzle this is, what an accent. Wonder if she has any more poetry up her sleeve

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
4 weeks ago

just came back for another read, i really like your work,

blaise25 profile image

blaise25  says:
3 weeks ago

so sweet and sexy poem Ivana, loved it ;p

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
3 weeks ago

I vana thnk u all so vere vere fer share my luv! xx

vere nice to see u, blaise! luv, luv, luv xx

poetlorraine profile image

poetlorraine  says:
3 weeks ago

another poem please, such a good start then just nothing.....

Ivana B WithUnow profile image

Ivana B WithUnow  says:
8 days ago

vell, u now di spell of luv? xx

seasoning profile image

seasoning  says:
2 days ago

i am also waiting for another poem please,

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