poem spring rain
64During the spring rains,
Between showers,
I risk a walk to the river,
Past the decaying log pile,
On a copper carpet
Of pine needles,
Down the hill and between
Two large Eastern white pines,
One living, one dead.
I walk quickly, knowing
I risk a soaking.
I step on rocks carefully
Placed in the creek
For just such hurried steps as mine.
Over the rise into the hemlocks,
The audible rush of the river
Is distinct now.
At its bank I watch for fish behind boulders
But don’t linger, fearing the next
Sheaf of rain.
Back through the living and the dead pines,
Up the hill quickly, heart beating, lungs suck air,
Back to the solidity of our rock ledge
And the shelter of our little house on the hill.
PrintShare it! — Rate it: up down flag this hub
Comments
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
The imagery pops out but still the poem remains restrained and laidback. Enjoyed this one, Thanks for sharing another great one :D
Did you plagiarize that from Robert Frost?
I will take that as a compliment.
it puts me right there. marvelous imagery. I love the contrast living and dead trees, and the carpet of copper.
I felt as if I was in your shoes, enjoying a peruse of your little corner of the earth....I have known such places and frequented them often to find peace and mirth, God has graced us with beauty placed in so many parts of our personal space, that one must pause in their busy days and savor the wonders with appreciation and awe on their face.
Great poem/hub...MFB III
I am definitely of an age that I appreciate the small pleasures of life. Thanks for the feedback







![Poetry and Life Transitions can be symbolized in the spirals of a stairway leading up or down. [Photos on this page, public domain.] Poetry and Life Transitions can be symbolized in the spirals of a stairway leading up or down. [Photos on this page, public domain.]](http://s4.hubimg.com/u/1849551_50.jpg)






Kushal Poddar says:
7 months ago
It prevails all my senses. An exquisite one.
http://hubpages.com/profile/Kushal+Poddar