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poem spring rain

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By barranca


During the spring rains,
Between showers,
I risk a walk to the river,
Past the decaying log pile,
On a copper carpet
Of pine needles,
Down the hill and between
Two large Eastern white pines,
One living, one dead.
I walk quickly, knowing
I risk a soaking.
I step on rocks carefully
Placed in the creek
For just such hurried steps as mine.
Over the rise into the hemlocks,
The audible rush of the river
Is distinct now.
At its bank I watch for fish behind boulders
But don’t linger, fearing the next
Sheaf of rain.
Back through the living and the dead pines,
Up the hill quickly, heart beating, lungs suck air,
Back to the solidity of our rock ledge
And the shelter of our little house on the hill.

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Kushal Poddar profile image

Kushal Poddar  says:
7 months ago

It prevails all my senses. An exquisite one.

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barranca profile image

barranca  says:
7 months ago

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

Cris A profile image

Cris A  says:
7 months ago

The imagery pops out but still the poem remains restrained and laidback. Enjoyed this one, Thanks for sharing another great one :D

Ralph Deeds  says:
7 months ago

Did you plagiarize that from Robert Frost?

barranca profile image

barranca  says:
7 months ago

I will take that as a compliment.

Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
7 months ago

it puts me right there. marvelous imagery. I love the contrast living and dead trees, and the carpet of copper.

MFB III profile image

MFB III  says:
3 months ago

I felt as if I was in your shoes, enjoying a peruse of your little corner of the earth....I have known such places and frequented them often to find peace and mirth, God has graced us with beauty placed in so many parts of our personal space, that one must pause in their busy days and savor the wonders with appreciation and awe on their face.

Great poem/hub...MFB III

barranca profile image

barranca  says:
3 months ago

I am definitely of an age that I appreciate the small pleasures of life. Thanks for the feedback

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