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Poem - Sedona Skin

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By Drax

Connie Lane talked about the red hills of Sedona in her profile and then one day I went to look at them, virtually.... the lines of this poem occurred to me...

so hey thanks Connie...

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Connie Lane said;-

'the beautiful red rocks of Sedona'

and I thought yeah right

reading the tourist soundbytes I play along -

humming yes dear yes dear

but then the virus of the idea multiplied and expanded

and I succumbed

--

iron horses dancing in the sun

little god children pouring rock castles

--

and then a gash on my page

their age obvious in the line-up

one tiny irrelevant human weighs in at 75

or thereabouts

and in the other corner from Sedona Arizona

- the red hills 15 million years or so

- undefeated

--

yes folks read all about it

--

the human found herself scaled

to better reflect the age difference

and we lost her

honey I shrunk the human

then a really cool vortex called to me

and I forgot all 75 years of my previous existence

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wind carved in the skin of Sedona

time whispers names

the circle of stone

the circle of stone

.

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Iðunn profile image

Iðunn  says:
2 years ago

it's good to read you again and I love this one. miss you, I did.

Moonmaiden profile image

Moonmaiden  says:
2 years ago

So glad to see you posting again. It's amazing how red the rocks are in AZ/Utah.

connie lane profile image

connie lane  says:
2 years ago

WOW! For once I am speechless and thank you. Beautiful!

Robin profile image

Robin  says:
2 years ago

It's nice to see you back, Drax. Poetry has been lacking lately without you! ;)

Drax profile image

Drax  says:
2 years ago

thanks very much to everyone for the lovely comments...

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