My "OCD " for Cyber Lover

Is this an illusion I spy ? or my Cyber lover " oh my "

Is not my lover real ?  or just a " Cyber Storker " ?
Is not my lover real ? or just a " Cyber Storker " ? | Source

From one space to another...I wonder ...I wander...in my mind...


I've loved you from the start....

You literally stole my heart.....

Every word you said....

Stuck in my head....

Although two years it's been and we're still apart....

I feel so close to you....

And I know you feel it too....

A love like this is rare to find....

And you're always priority in my mind....

All my free time is spent with you....

I once had friends, but now very few....

They say I'm wrong, but I don't care....

These days I never sleep, eat or drink.....

I just sit here and write what I think....


* * update Jan 9, 2014

And as weird as this poem may seem to some....

A movie was just made titled " Her "

About a lonely writer, who falls for his computer...

And the actor's first name is Joaquin...



Comments 29 comments

Mhatter99 profile image

Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Shh... my secret.


DDE profile image

DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Love is such a secret.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Mhatter99...Mum's the word....


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

DDE...Yes....it's best to keep love a secret..and the best kept love secret is the best secret to keep.... ...little play on words...thanks to you both Mhatter99/DDE...appreciated...


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

A very creative piece. I enjoyed this very much. voted up awesome!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

lovedoctor926...Thanks for the vote...yes we writers have some strange

" quirks "...and our families don't always understand...but our computers give us " unconditional love " hehehe...


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epigramman 3 years ago

Well I feel the same way about you my ravishing KJ - a woman for all seasons and the 5th one especially, lol, 'cos you always write like a force of nature - and it's just in my nature to say you always make me feel good and that's a special place to be.

Out now on my deck for my lunch with my cats of pasta and meat sauce with some nice fresh bread - and sending you my most sincere best wishes from Colin and his felines of fur at lake erie time 12:54pm and spring is here , finally as they say in Canada , lol


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Lol @epi. Kj, that was pretty funny! For now, our computer is the only way to receive unconditional love. Have a great day! thanks for stopping by.


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Sneha Sunny 3 years ago from India

This is very well narrated poem! Really liked the flow. :)


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

epigramman....so glad Spring has finally found her way to your part of the world...( she is such a "seedy " one )... soon she will be " ravishing " Summer .... give the " purrs ' a hug...


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

lovedoctor926....you are welcome...always a pleasure..thanks for the visit..have a wonderful day...

Sneha Sunny....glad you enjoyed...thanks for visiting again.....


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

hahaha This is great and so true!!! Isn't it sad . . . ha!

Voted up ++++ and sharing

Hugs and love from me too, Faith Reaper


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Faith Reaper... hugs backatcha....and thanks for the vote-up...glad you got a laugh....


Ausseye 3 years ago

Hi Force-de-gee

Loved the hub and its configuration:

Your love is both in black and white

You see mnay great offering

And these we love so very much

And yet you make us ponder still

About the bigger truth

A moment, a time, a reckoning about your writes

Of standing tall and sitting tight

The word has power and some have even greater might

Cause now it floats in spaces well above the printed word

Empowering the small and reclusive nerds

They are now our ever equals

In these intense communication places

As we all share with happy anticipation their

Brilliant and enter-training spaces


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Ausseye....thank you for stopping by reading and commenting on my poem...have a great day..and thanks for the follow..


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cherylone 3 years ago from Connecticut

Wow, I wonder how many have felt that way (I know I have), great little ditty. PS love the picture.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

cherylone....I'm sure there's many more than we could ever imagine....

glad you liked the pic//and thanks for the comment


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Kj

Hope it is you cyber lover and not cyber storker. Love your picture. LOL

Voted up +++ and sharing


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CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Funny but oh, so true! Guilty, your honor!

Brilliant! Thumbs up and passing it along.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Sueswan....Glad you liked the pic...it is a sketch of a " character " I created years ago for a friend's "Island" themed restaurant...thanks for the vote-up and share.....

CrisSP....Thank you for the " thumbs up "..and you saw the humour of my write....


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

kj force,

I just want you to know that you are not alone in your battle with OCD, this was all too familiar for me. I think it's awesome!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Cantuhearmescream..... ??? yes I can .......the best writers in the world that have gone down in history...wrote from their experiences both happy and sad...wrongs and rights...gains and losses...words from their mind that they cannot speak of....that many would not understand....thank you for complimenting me on the words/thoughts from mine...Happy Earth Day...


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

kj force,

That is all extremely comforting to hear. I tend to be all over the place. That's what writing should be shouldn't it, expressions of ourselves, our emotions our feelings. I enjoy reading just as wide array of things as I like writing. You always have such spunk to contribute to the HP community. You are a model HP citizen! :-)

Happy Earth Day to you too!


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DREAM ON 3 years ago

You bring writing to life and the storker too.What talent.Always enjoyable and interesting voted up.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

DREAM ON...thank you for the kind words...glad you enjoyed....


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PHILLYDREAMER 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Cyber Love is nice, but nothing beats the real thing. You have to be brave and make your cyber world a reality.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

PHILLYDREAMER....I do have the real thing...however it is nice when the physical is absent... that the words can be expressed elsewhere to be shared and perceived for those that might now be so lucky....thanks for the input..


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Ruby H Rose 3 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

love here, love there, love everywhere....what a wonderful hub this is, love your style, um, toasty fire, here I come.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Ruby H Rose....thanks for stopping by and commenting..glad you enjoyed

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