I Tried -Poem


I tried to color your world

But, you just wouldn't let me

I tried to hold your hand

But you wanted to be free

I tried to walk with you

But you always walked ahead

I tried to laugh with you

But your smile wouldn't show

I tried to guide you

But I guess I was too slow

I tried to express my friendship

But you could never see

I tried so many things

I tried so many ways

But you just wouldn't let me

So set in all your ways.

VLH 02/06/2001

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IN2Deep 6 years ago Author

Sometimes thats all we can do is try--and try and try!

Thank you for reading and comenting.

Vietnan-thank you--it means alot to reach out and touch someone with just a few words.

Suizy Q--Keep Your head up-Your Heart will lead you-to better things.

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suizyQ 6 years ago

very nice, kind of my feelings today. Thank you

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vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

I tried to color your world, I like , Thanks for sharing.

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