I Will Catch Thee! Let Go And See

You Can't give up Are Give In

 

I yelled out I give up,

But my heart kept pumping.

I yelled out I give up,

But he would not take his breath from me.

 

 

I yelled out I’m tired,

Then he would renew his strength within me.

  

 

 

I yelled out I give in,

He said I will rebuild.

I yelled out I will sit still,

He said you will be filled.

 

 

I yelled out I can not do this any more,

He said I have.

What makes the servant better than the master?

 

 

I said I can’t see,

He said take my hand.

I said I have nothing,

He said I am all that you need.

 

 

I said I’m standing on the edge,

Dear God my soul about to flee.

 

 

He said I Will Catch THEE!

©6/10/10 (Sharon Smith)

 

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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Thanks so very much for your graceful comment epigramman.I love to write music as well.

Most of what I write come to me in lyical flow.

Peace and Blessings!

Sharon Smith


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epigramman 6 years ago

Peace to you too!!!

I have an infinite love for gospel music - and in your lyrical flow (so simple and yet so pure) I can read it and feel it .......


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello 2besure,thanks for your visit and comment.

Trust in God alone!and so shall he carry us.

Peace and Blessings!

Sharon Smith


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2besure 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

A wonderful word of encouragement to surrender and trust God! 2 thumbs up!


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hi ralwus,So good to see you.:)

Thanks so very much for your comment.

Great Faith moves Mountains,I have seen it in action all my days I never have to wonder.

Peace!

Blessings!

Sharon Smith


ralwus 6 years ago

You have the faith. Good stuff. Woot!


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello geegee77 thank you for your visit and comment.

Thanks for the follow!:)

Peace!

God Bless!

Sharon Smith


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello rose56 thanks for stopping in and reading,and leaving a comment.

Peace to you!

God bless!

Sharon Smith


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geegee77 6 years ago from The Lone Star State!!

Very beautiful hub:)


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rose56 6 years ago

very good i really enjoyed it thanks.


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello Fread allen thanks for your visit and graceful comment.

I will visit your hubs.

God bless and Peace!


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fred allen 6 years ago from Myrtle Beach SC

Very powerful! I just wrote about the same subject. Your words show you have the heart of a poet. I hope to see more.


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello coffeesnob,Thanks for stopping in and reading.

Peace and Blessing!

Sharon Smith


coffeesnob 6 years ago

SwiftlyClean

Oh this is beautiful. thanks for sharing it.


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

heart4theword,thanks for stopping in and leaving a comment.

Trusting God alone!:)

Peace and Blessing !

Sharon Smith


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Star439,Thanks for stopping in and leaving a comment.

Peace and Blessings!

Sharon Smith


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heart4theword 6 years ago from hub

This poem, is beautiful. So nice that we can step out in faith, and land in the loving hands of God Almighty:)


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stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Very lovely poem. GBY.


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SwiftlyClean 6 years ago from Texas Author

Hello coolmon2009,how are you?

Thanks for the visit...I need to come visit you.:)

Peace!

Sharon Smith


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Coolmon2009 6 years ago from Texas, USA

Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it :)

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