-I'll be with death collecting souls-

No forgiveness for thy sins!!! Who cast thee first stone? Who bows to thine feet to repent? Who sins when the moneys spent? Who holds the key to the gateway of all that ever prosper, just to fall into an eternal darkness.....PAIN!!!!.....?"I do not show no pregudice" "Ye money can not compensate you for your sins" "You too will walk through deaths never ending darkness, to the ends of the eternal mist of all that ever was and ever will be, to look at beauty of enlightment, just to have thy soul fall into the depths of hells interior, to remain unto the day thy energy is recycled to the negative aggression of thee atmosphere inwich my soul has romed, since before the beginning of the stars". "I'll greet you and ask you what it was you loved most in life? "I'll listen to you sin your final sin, on that day your breath leaves your body and you start that journey to your fate, to your dume. Death is not the ending, don't you worry friends, deaths just the beginning.......For love and for sins". BY:M.W. EESE. -Unto that day- I watch and say, I'll be there to watch your souls get taking, for thy laws of man be broken, While I remain a poet unspoken, in this time of greed.

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Ericdierker 4 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Should man be so naïve, that he plays such an important role in the lives of all.

I think perhaps grandiosity has harnessed your ego.

but in that I see it is me that I am talking about and criticizing

Nice poem for reflecting.


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Jessica Ranae Ray 4 years ago from Arizona

Nice poem and very different. It made me feel like reading Dante's Inferno again :)


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epigramman 4 years ago

...I'd die to be able to write like this .....well hold on I just told you about my coffin story in the other comment so yeah I'm already dead - but what I meant is would die again to write like this ........ lake erie time 9:54pm ontario Hades

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