In a Deafening Silence..........

Voices of passion scream in the morning sun
with no one to listen ..... the stream
running steadily through tunnels of trees
Squirrels ......blue jays.......gather overhead
I must have moved again
For in this dream I watched
one drop of pure water fall from
near forever
though I have no idea
how far
And when it was caught gently on the
soft surface of one green leaf
it all began
The drop of water and the leaf
became one
And as across the green surface
they caressed
the drop and
the leaf
And became one like a finger
tracing across the soft flesh
of your breast
or the small of your back
or the length of
your forearm
becoming one and as moist
and moving
as a stream


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AndreaSWilson 4 years ago from Bel Air, MD

Lovely!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

I like it. Nice fantasizing.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful!!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi Andrea S Wilson, Thank you for sharing this!....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee, Thank you ....for liking it!lol.....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Always exploring HI!, Thank you for thaT!...:-}


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romari 4 years ago from Heaven

thanks for your hub!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Another fine work! Up and beautiful!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Romari , No thank you for stopping and sharing....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Willstarr , thank you my friend.!....:-}


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

it leaves an imprint in the mind...nice hub...


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Raciniwa hello , thank you ! Nice to see you....:-}


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful! and voted up


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

M.M. Thank you my friend , for your enjoyment!lol........:-}


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

I doubt I've ever read a lovelier, more expressive declaration of love and genuine passion, ahorseback. It gives me goosebumps.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Nellieanna ! Finally ....I give a woman goosebumps ! Ohh poor me , its been such an long and uphill battle !lol.....My dream come true!...Thank you dear lady!


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

Beautiful :)


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Ruchiria, Why thank you my new friend ! Have a nice day !......:-}


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Freya Cesare 4 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Never thought it will lead to there at the end. Interesting. you give passion different perspective from how it usually sound. I need to learn that trick. ^^


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hello Freya , No tricks , just writing about the yearnings of life , just like you do my dear girl! I hope your having a great day! Hugs....:-}

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