Look A Beautiful Star

A One Of A Kind

How lucky we are

To be at the right place at the right time

To see with our very own eyes

Something so magnificent

There is another star over there

One more up above

They pop out like popcorn in a popper

The sky is full

The first star was one of many

So incredible like nothing I have ever seen

Breath taking

Alluminating

I feel connected to everyone and every thing in the universe

How is this possible ?

I don't know

Maybe we can talk and discuss

The world we share

Enjoying this moment

Cherishing it

The way it was meant to be

Side by side

A long time in the making

Worth all the effort

For the world to learn

It takes two people

To make life wonderful





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Missy Smith 14 months ago from Florida

Nice poem. I love star gazing too. I liked your metaphor of the Stars being like popcorn. :)


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DREAM ON 14 months ago Author

Missy Smith I wish you a wonderful good morning. Last night we had over cast and those beautiful stars were lost. I felt deeply sad until I realized you are seeing the very stars I know and love so much. They are not gone after all just hidden by a cloudy blanket. I am so relieved I will start my day with a new enthusiasm and excitement. Thank you for reading and sharing.


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billybuc 14 months ago from Olympia, WA

I love the simile about popcorn and I love your poetry.


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MsDora 14 months ago from The Caribbean

Beautiful alliteration: They pop out like popcorn in a popper. I also like your final conclusion. Lovely poem!


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DREAM ON 14 months ago Author

billybuc The world is filled with unlimited potential. All we have to do is look. Thank you for reading and commenting. Have a good night.


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DREAM ON 14 months ago Author

MsDora Nature shows us things we can barely comprehend. A beauty we can't make no matter how hard we try. Loving everything that has been created over time brings us closer to understanding.Caring about other people leads us to our true purpose. Thank you for reading my words and sharing.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This is very lovely. I love your poetry. Cannot understand why you are no longer in my notifications. At least I have not seen you post anything for awhile. I was not here too for some time. Let me see what I have missed but it is strange.


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DREAM ON 14 months ago Author

Gypsy Rose Lee I am very happy to see you. Life gets so busy forc everyone. I noticed my friends list also gets changed once and awhile even though I haven't changed it. I just figured people found other sites to go instead. I have barely enough time for HubPages. I try to post when I can and still squeeze in a poem whenever possible. Life never stops amazing me in so many ways. I hope all is well and things are going great.

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