Two Friends till the End ........

In the din of noise ...... snow to rain as the
overflowing brooks convene
They tried wading across
the flooding stream

Such are the ways of youth .....gambling
with mortalities choices
But over the sounds of cascading water
no one hears the voices

Laughing and jumping from
stone to fallen log
He loses his footing in the springtime
rain and fog

His hold on his friends collar is
slipping and cold
Ice on the grip of death untill
he loses his hold

For two hours he holds on but cannot
feel his arm
Yet in the din of the river
waiting in the shadows of harm

Then away in the river as the mist
absorbs his friend
One life will go on .........at the same time
another will end

They found him in the morning
in the shallows downstream
And yet as the years passed .......your
friend still walks in a dream

And just as his vision jumps from the edge
you awaken in a tangled spell
Your hand gripping the sheets
like the collar that you held









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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A very sad poem

Tragedies like these stay with us always and haunt our dreams.

I hope this did not happen to you.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

What an awful experience - nightmares will be your lot :(


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Rosemay , No not to me but in the next town , the boy that drowned was the police chiefs son. And sadly yes the other boy held onto him for a while before he had to let go...:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Martie , Im sure it is for the boy who survived..:-}


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

How sad. This type of thing happens sometimes and we try valiantly to save someone only to see them slip away while we wail in horror. Your poem could reference so much ahorseback. The attempted rescue from drugs, alcohol, suicide attempts and a hundred more tragedies. Well written with compassion and love.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hyphenbird hello, yes it could reference many situations and I didnt even think of that , the story of these two is true ,unfortunately! Cute new photo by the way!.....:-}


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is awesome ahorseback. How very sad for the boy who survived...


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Always Exploring , Yes , the cold spring snow runoff in the high waters ! A sure tragedy!....:-}


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Tom Rubenoff 5 years ago from United States

Haunting - and a powerful commentary on the power of regret.


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VioletSun 5 years ago from Oregon/ Name: Marie

Sad and a haunting,beautiful poem my friend.


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Fennelseed 5 years ago from Australia

Two boys chasing adventure on the river, only one returning. I know this story, ahorseback. In my story the two boys were named Dale and Kristian. Kristian tried desperately for over an hour to rescue Dale, long after all hope was gone. Today Kristian lives with a haunting thought in his mind that he should have tried harder. He need not suffer from this thought as there is not an ounce of blame, just gratefulness for his efforts, but suffer he does for Kristain loved his best mate like no other.

Thank you for sharing this tragic story so beautifully. I relate and weep for these two boys as I do for those in my story.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Tom Rubenoff, Yes sad but true. ! Thanks for sharing.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Violet my friend ! Why does tragedy strike our heart cords so ? There is far to much of it ,yes?...I hope you are well!.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hello Fennelseed , I have thought about this occurance for years and shake my head each time I think of ,How? And knowing Dales story , I never put the similarities together. I'm sorry for the pain it causes you ,as I'm sure it does. And yet we know Dale was truely living out his dream ,wasn't he ! Dale ,just like Tom , has amazing friends and family too! God Bless you for your sacrifice and your understanding of boys , men and life! Because thats all we can do is to try and get our hearts wrapped around these things . Remember Fennel , Dale looks down from above!.......Hugs Ed.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

a very sad ending, i remembered my near drowning experience of almost 200 foot lake...but thankfully i survived...


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

So very sad, what a tragedy...

Beautiful poem.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Raciniwa , we could never do without you my dear!, how old were you?!...:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Movie Master girl!. There is too much tragedy!.........:-]


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carolp 5 years ago from Switzerland

Just love your words, i feel the place and the scenery of two people holding on until one has gone.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

CarolP , THANK YOU MY FRIEND !.....:-}


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sofs 5 years ago

Haunting, poignant and so real... I like the picture of the hand hanging on to his friend... beautiful friendship.. even in death.


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ladyjojo 4 years ago

hmmm good sad stuff, lol

Take care


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Hi JoJO girl, Yes sad but true !.....:-}


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jandee 4 years ago from Liverpool.U.K

Every day we read things and think 'That is the worst thing I've heard' this surely is one of those and must be terrible for the friend who survived. It almost is identical to a short story I wrote years ago although the ending wasn't as brutal.. You captured it well,

best from jandee


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Jandee , I will check out that story my friend , yes life is a strange ride ! Thank you for stopping by.......:-}

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