Two People In Love: Haiku Poem About Passion

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You make my heart whole

When your love caressed my soul

See how I tremble


Incoherently

I mumbled as you pass by

You make me tongue-tied


Love shine in your eyes

Your enigmatic smile, begs

How long will it last


I’ll tell you, my love-

Eternity will be ours

Love is forever

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Fervently, we kissed

Lips entwined, hearts beating fast

United in love

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Blondey, nice to see you!...thanks for stopping by, much appreciated.


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blondey 3 years ago

Nice!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Voronwe, You are having a busy day. I thought Damon needed just a little help with this one. Take care now.


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Voronwe 4 years ago

Great words of passion! "When your love caressed my soul..." - seriously lost it right there!

(As if Damon Salvatore didn't do the job kindly enough! :-) !!)


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The original Eman 4 years ago from london

No problem at all, your poems are steamy miss i must find a woman to read them too lol.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thank you Eman, You rocks!!


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The original Eman 4 years ago from london

Mate this is some intensive passion of love i must say lol. The pictures worked wonders again and i'm glad i read this :)


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Very passionate!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Wonderful love haiku's - full of passion!

Voted up/beautiful and shared.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Blossom, thank you so much for the generous comment. Have a lovely day.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Tireless traveler, thank you for taking the time to stop by on your travelling to leave this lovely comment.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Five lovely, sensitive haiku poems! Quite a feast.


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tirelesstraveler 4 years ago from California

Very beautiful. Intense.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh, what beautiful sensual images you painted here, tobusiness! Awesome job!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Impassioned !!! Voted up across the board. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Indeed very passionate Haiku . love this..a passionate thing , a divine thing ! Voted up !


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LailaK 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

I like your poem a lot! Very intense and the rhyme scheme is awesome! Very well-done! Voted up :) Loving the pictures also!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Passionate! loved it... fascinating clicks


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Intense passion of lovers overwhelms me.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

cleaner3, thank you so much for the visit, and for the much appreciated wow. best regards


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Wow, very nice work. i like it.

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