4 p.m.


4 p.m. was my favorite time

you used to wait for her

I used to wait for mine

time was flyin’

who would have thought

that’s the right place

and the right time

who would have thought

I’d cling to you

in one corner of wrong avenue



And so the clock hit to four

you were smilin’ at me more and more

in your stare I’ve seen what you’ve been dreamin’

and your voice told me I should believe it…



‘t was 4 o’clock in the aftie

when time runs so slow

still my boyfriend won’t show up

and no sign of your girl though

who would have thought

we’d share that moment

odd excitement

who would have thought

I’d cling to you

in one corner of wrong avenue



And so the clock hit to four

you were talkin’ to me more and more

in your angst I’ve felt what you’ve been missin’

and your sad face told me I should change it…



We met again at 4 p.m.

but just like any other time

4 p.m. couldn’t be forever

Everythin’ ended out of line



***a long time ago

written 04052008

© 2009-Nov. b l a i s e



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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

Nice. First stanza was my favorite. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

haha yeah my fave too ;p

though that was so wrong

thanks Randy!


Keira 7 6 years ago

Beautiful.:) Always happy to read your work. God Bless.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks a lot Keira for the usual visit :)

you're a great writer. God bless always :)


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Enigmatic Me 6 years ago from East Coast Canada

Life eh... timing is a good and bad thing.... brings us to where we need to be, shows us the possibilities.... temptation abound...

Nicely written


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Enigmatic ;p

yeah every tick of time is a possibility..


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kendalcushman87 6 years ago from London ON

Wow, I love this Blaise. Opens the doors for imaginative imagery. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

glad you loved it Ken :)

twas a poem I made last year, but made it a lyrical poem instead. I'm glad it opens a door for you.. thanks!


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MFB III 6 years ago from United States

Two disillusioned souls

left waiting for the

missing two who caused

their dissappointment,

suddenly find each other

across the emptiness

that surrounds them,

thus happenstance

becomes romance.....

truly a lovely tale,

told daily and nightly

all across the world.

~~~~MFB III


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks for the comment MFB III

very poetic ;p

that's lovely, liked it!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Nice! I could sense being there.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks for passing by Micky Dee :)


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

Really nice Blaise.I think I've been

on Wrong Avenue before.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

really Dark Heart? LOL

Wrong Avenue is a place I dare not to go back hehe

thanks friend! :)


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ahorseback 5 years ago

And I thought I was the only one who thought this way, or had imaginary loves. Great read....


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

hahah Thanks for dropping by horseback :)


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writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska

i like the line... in one corner of wrong avenue. very clever. lvh


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Thank you writinginalaska :) what a pretty place


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

That Wrong Avenue... What a beautiful, captivating poem, Fehl! I fell in love with it. It touches heart and soul, tells the story of possibilities, of dreams and wishful thinking...questions, forever left unanswered. I think it's a very deep poem. Doesn't matter that it's written log time ago, it's timeless. (See, I got emotional all over it =))


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

I always love hearing your comments. It makes me see what is inside your heart.. You are very amazing and deep. I admire guys like that. They are always so interesting. You are a gem.

*hugs you lots* Thank you, Max!

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