A BUTTERFLY IN SPRING....by b. Malin

ODE TO SPRING...

What is it about a Butterfly in Spring...

That takes my Breath away?

Is it the way they spread their Wings,

As they delicately land on a Flower?

So careful not to ruin its Beauty,

As they Pollnate it around...and around.

If I were a Bird, I'd probably start to Sing.

Spring makes me feel so Alive...

I fall onto the grass and look up at the Sky,

And I'm a Kid again...I even think I can Fly!

Winter was much too long...such a Sad Song.

And then it's Spring and the Butterflies come along...

Bringing New Hope, for another New Beginning.

Making me feel I can do Anything...

Be Anyone... I choose to be.

But after thinking it through...

 I still would choose... to be Me!



Comments 38 comments

Cheryl Kapelner-Champ 5 years ago

Love it, like a beautiful spring flower!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Aah, this lively poem so represents how we feel during Spring! Lovely thoughts magically put together!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

I agree with Fossillady! It was written in the true spirit of spring.


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Scribenet 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Spring, just the thing after a long cold winter! You are right,I always feel renewed as well. Butterflies are the essence of the freedom of abandoning our heavy winter clothes...I always feel so light...almost like a butterfly... a really big one...lol :)


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Cheryl, I so appreciate your comments.

Ah thanks Fossillady, so glad that I was able to catch this moment in Spring, for it is Magical!

Hey WillStarr, thank you, that's what I was striving for!

Oh Scribenet, I enjoyed your wonderful comments...Hooray for Spring!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

I enjoyed this . . . The weather is still so "crappy" here that I feel like a little kid waiting for that special holiday to finally arrive. According to the forecast, it'll still be another week at least.


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The Frog Prince 5 years ago from Arlington, TX

Butterflies are in the air today it seems. In about a month, we will have an abundance of them here on the farm.

Beautiful my friend.

The Frog


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Sharyn you've really described Spring so well...let's hope we see it soon!

Froggy, that sounds wonderful...Hope you enjoy the show they put on. Thanks for enjoying my contribution to Spring.


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

This was so beautiful. I love butterfly. Thanks for writing this. Vote up!

Prasetio


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Hi b. as you say "snap" but your poem is beautiful, mine was nonsense as usual. Still playing with words as usual, hoping one day to amaze someone and write something good. Pratice. How are you we haven't spoke for a while. Happy Easter x


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much Prasetio for thinking this piece Beautiful...I too have always loved Butterflies.

I'm good my friend, we had gone to see relatives for a few days, however one of them was sick and now (we who never get SICK are nursing their Germs....) Oh well. Your Hub was Beautiful and Enjoyable. Have a Happy Easter, BlueStar.


shygirl2 5 years ago

I love butterflies, b. Malin, especially when they choose to follow me around. They say it brings good luck if they do. Cool poem and such a great way to start spring. : )


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Christopher Price 5 years ago from Vermont, USA

b.-

I've tried to text the Monarchs to tell them not to hurry back...they'd be sorely disappointed. The weather here has been wet and chilly and the perfect excuse to spike the coffee. I'll share with the butterflies should they arrive soon, but I'm afraid they'll fly a little funny afterward!

Your lovely poem is as close to Spring as I have gotten so far, and I do thank you for it.

Cheers! :{)

CP


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

I m thinking of planting a bush to attract the butterflies. They are so beautiful.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Shy Girl, I sometimes think when a Butterfly follows me around, that it is a Message from my Mom. She's been gone along time, so I found it comforting. So glad you liked this one.

Wow, CP, thank you for your lovely compliments, always means a lot when a fellow Hubber gives them...glad I could send a little Spring your way.

I think I have a Bush that attracts Humming Birds...It's a real treat to see Breakfastpops...And on the side of my house, one that attracts Butterflies!


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Butterflies are truly magical! Their colors, patterns, fluttering . . . Milkweed is great for attracting butterflies. On a cruise once, I stopped in the Bahamas. One of the "tours" was to a butterfly farm -- owned by an American who grew tired of practicing law. Smart man! We have gone from spring right into summer here!


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Karanda 5 years ago from Australia

Beautiful poem. I love the spring and the butterflies. Such a wonderful reminder that nature gets on with it. If only we could learn from it.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Sorry Sally, I Love Spring, but that's what usually happens "Right into Summer We Go"! And one less Lawyer is Always a good thing! Thanks for stopping by and all your thoughts as well.

Thanks for enjoying my Poem, Karanda...and another Spring which is here to stay!


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Erin LeFey 5 years ago from Maryland

I love butterflies as you know - since I made this my year of the butterfly back in Jan! I love your poem, I'm afraid in recent years it seems the population has declined around the MD/DC/VA area - but probably because they are looking for more beautiful places to go. Can't say I blame them! Voted you up and beautiful!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Oh Erin thank you for enjoying my Ode to Butterflies...The Monarch Butterflies, I believe fly up from Mexico, which is quite a trip in it's self!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Ah - so cool - brilliant, as always. I love your work.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Acaetnna, your words are always such a welcomed addition!


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toknowinfo 5 years ago

Beautiful writing. I know butterflies remind you of your mother, so I found this especially touching to read. As always, I am so glad you shared your talent. Rated up and beautiful.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Ah thank you for remembering Toknowinfo about my late Mother and Butterflies. I always light up a smile when one comes around, It makes me feel like she is near! Thanks for enjoying.


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chspublish 5 years ago from Ireland

A Spring song. Excellent.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Chspublish, I hope you will "sing" along!


shygirl2 5 years ago

Great poem! I love butterflies, as they appear so magical. What is really cool is when one follows you around. They say it brings good luck. :D Up and awesome!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Once again, thanks Shygirl, I always look forward to your lovely, heartfelt comments.


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Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

b-I don't know how I missed this one, since I love butterflies so much. This is beautiful-what talent you have. :)


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Oh Denise Thank you, I know you've been busy, so I certainly appreciate your stopping by and your lovely comments.


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alocsin 5 years ago from Orange County, CA

Alas, we don't get many butterflies here in Los Angeles. So it's good to see them in your poem. Voting this Up and Beautiful.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much Alocsin. Yes, thank goodness Southern New Jersey has Butterflies.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

I don't see many Butterflies but the ones I have seen are so beautiful.You bring back all those sweet memories.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you Dream On...When I see a Monarch, I always think it's a message from my Mother. So glad you Enjoyed this Hub and those Memories.


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haikutwinkle 5 years ago

Dear b.Malin,

What a lovely hub about butterflies!

Keep writing!

Regards,

haikutwinkle


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hi Halkutwinkle, thanks for your Wonderful Comments on my Hub, so glad you Enjoyed! Now, I'm off to check your Hubs out.


JinnyMarte 5 years ago

Why is it that everything that you post seems to be so great? I love this poem b.Malin. Not only do I love Spring but I also love butterflies. It was a perfect descritption of that feeling, specially when you described the feeling of being a child again and feeling that you can fly, while lying on the grass...My favorite for sure...


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Why Thank You Jinny, your Comments really made my Day. I 'm thrilled that you totally Enjoyed this Poem, for I am a "Spring" child at Heart!

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