A Boo Hoo Day


the clouds are just a cryin'...
in a pitiful boo hoo...
enough to keep me sighin'
and make me feel right blue...

everything is soggy...
weepy puddles all about...
the ground is soft and boggy
the day is in a pout!

snow is just a meltin'...
and turning into slush.
as cold rain drops are peltin'
its not a day to rush!

so while these clouds are cryin'...
sobbin' their boo hoo...
I'll be here denyin'...
that I'm a weepin' too!

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thebluestar 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

lovely. A few simple words but really nice sentiments.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

thanks thebluestar...was kind of a fun piece about a rainy blue day.

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Spirit Whisperer 6 years ago from Isle of Man

Brilliant. The picture also enhances the very expertly described moo-d

Thank you.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

Spirit Whisperer! A delightful, moo-d altering comment! No Boo Hoo-ing here! Thanks!

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hipcio 6 years ago from Poland

Yes, Spirt - Brilliant is a good word.

Thank You No_Clue!

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GusTheRedneck 6 years ago from USA

No_Clue - Did you wake up today and find you had donned your "blue genes?" :)

Gus :-)))

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

hipcio, thank you! I am happy you stopped by!

Gus...how did you know??? lololol! sniff sniff!

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dianeaugust 6 years ago from Tennessee

Such a nice way to put all the boo hoos that come up for us. Lovely language. Lovely words! da

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

thank you, da! clouds quit cryin today! wooo Hooo! Thanks for the read and lovely compliment!

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lawrencebeach2010 6 years ago from Shreveport, LA

I love this so much emotion and consistency

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

thanks Lawrencebeach! I so appreciate the read and comment!

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Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

Yeah, this winter has nearly brought me to tears as well. They just never seem to end.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

Doug, Take heart! Spring is near! Good things come to he who waits...and God knows...we's awaiting! Thanks for the read and comment!

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vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

must be the winter blues, sometimes we just want to weep with nothing to do but stare out the window in wish that spring will soon be here.

God Bless

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

vet, winter holds its own beauty but enough is enough, already! lol...thanks for the read and your comment!

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attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

A lovely, if somewhat sombre, rhyme. Well done.

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2besure 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

I have had many boo hoo days and always appreciate the sunshine! Beautifully done.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

2besure, I do too! Thanks for the read and comment!

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erthfrend 6 years ago from Florida

Aww, I really like this, I loved the style and the imagery..and the picture went perfectly with it..Great job!!

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

thanks, erthfrend! I so appreciate your read and comment!

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Fossillady 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Enjoyed this boo hoo from you hoo!

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

Fossillady, your comment made me smile! wooo hooo!

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lilbittykitty90 6 years ago from Here

We all have days like this. Beautiful.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

lilbittykitty, it is so true! Thanks for stopping by!

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Mike Light 6 years ago

That sounds like a dark day, you convey the emotion perfectly through this simplisticity and beauty.

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No_Clue 6 years ago Author

Mike, it was a dreary day, but...it passed...and then it snowed!!! lol...thank you so much for your read and lovely comment. I am in a silly sort of place at the moment...so forgive, please...this too shall pass! Blessings upon you!

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ClaraN9 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Very nice poem!! I really enjoyed it! I love rainy days though, because I can stay in and be lazy.

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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, ClaraN! I like rainy days too!

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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Amazing blues! This is just so beautiful while being tad bit sad. I love it, it sounds strange, but I say that I feel like it is sort of sounds soothing to me.

No_Clue 4 years ago

Max, I remember the day I wrote this, and the writing soothed me a bit! Thank you, again, and hugs!

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