A Collector's Coin

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A Collector's Coin

I'm different sides to a single coin,
minted from one womb and loin...
melded precious metals joined
into a rare collector's coin.

Each side imprinted unto its own,
like fragile glass that's fired and blown,
reveals its tale in poetic tone...
precious, unique, oblique, unknown.

With facets, yet, both sharp and smooth,
some to graze and some to soothe...
was forged by hands of bitter youth...
refined by wear to spend in truth.

Burnished by the sands of time...
its vintage grows to reach its prime.
When dropped, it's jingle a lilting chime,
beyond the ordinary dime.

With different sides, this single coin,
Yet, minted from one womb and loin...
was melded from precious metals joined
into a unique collector's coin.

"Copyright 2011, All Rights Reserved."

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

HA! Once again I sniff the message. Kinda smells like a scent I very well know right below my human nose. Great read No_Clue. Always....

smiles :)

bella


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justom 5 years ago from 41042

But a collectors coin only has 2 sides and is possessed by someone and kept hidden away :-P Nice work! Peace!! Tom


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

bella, you don't miss a beat!

Stand atop with planted feet!

Catch the whiff with readied nose...

to scent the smell of dog or rose!

Hugs, Girl!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

justom, your comment made me smile....as usual! "A coin in the hand is worth two in the pocket (of someone else...)" lol...I just coined that one!!! Lord, I'm pushing the envelope here! Hugs!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

NOTE: This poem was inspired by thebluestar...who planted a thought with a comment!


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tumblintumblweed 5 years ago

Awesome piece of work, No_Clue, but then what else would one expect??


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

O gosh, tumblin...blushing...a thousand thank you's to you!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

This is along the same lines as the Evil Twins

are you two trying to tell your readers something? ;]

very good work, up/awesome


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Ben, perhaps the message is to us, rather that our readers!!! lol...No_Clue, really! lol...thank you for your visit! Peace!


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

Well this collector's item is certainly in mint condition. It flows like liquid gold and sets a big impression. cheers


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

attemptedhumour...I hope it is not too forward to say this but...I love you! That is a most sublime comment! Made me grin ear to ear! Cheers to you too!


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

Red and blue are at opposite ends of the spectrum that make up white light like opposite faces of the coin you mention here. Most of us spend our lives on an endless see-saw between happiness and pain. we can't be even aware of one without also the other so in this world duality is a necessity that naturally arises as a consequence of being human. So don't sweat it enjoy it!


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Spirit Whisperer, that is a comfort! Thank you! The truth is, that I am coming to see that it serves me well...and it is best to embrace that duality rather than regret it! That is huge for me! Hugs!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Beautiful again no-clue, I see I still have to learn a lot to raise up to your level. Up and awesome.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

thebluestar, it is not true! You tell yourself untruths! Write, star, Write! You are not a good judge here...and I am not a qualified judge of my own work...but as with anything, practice hones the skill! Hugs to you, star! Write!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

My dear No-Clue, justice is what justice see's my friend. I love your writings and truly believe you have a great talent. I on the other hand am still learning poetry. You will still be my inspiration, just like Bill and Wayne, until I feel confident with my poetry writing. Bless you for your comment and good luck always with your work. x


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

I have always been my worst critic, star, and someone wise told me I am not qualified to judge! I have found that to be Truth! I am your undyingly loyal fan forever, you have much talent and heart! Hugs to you, and much love!


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

That's fine i'm too old to get in trouble, or catch you.


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No_Clue 5 years ago Author

Thank you, attemptedhumour! In reality, so am I!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

How cool is that! I am grinning and I love the hidden meaning! What an awesome poem!


No_Clue 4 years ago

(blushing) thank you, Max! I am humbled and tickled!

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