A Final Farewell

Bidding your final farewell,

Feeling the ground beneath your feet vanish as you step over the edge

Plunging into the abyss of uncertainty

When there is no more discussion, no chance to debate

When you finally lose all hope of control

When she says, "It's over".


When a strong arn catches you at point of no return

When ray of hope brings light to your darkened vision

When your eyes open to your dreams and those dreams become reality

When she still won't give up on you.



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Mira Fang 2 years ago from Canada

Isn't it?! In my experience, there are few things more rewarding than completing a piece!


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Bambi L'Amour 2 years ago from Brighton, UK Author

Cool, I just nailed nailed one now, taken most of the day, so satisfying though!!


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Mira Fang 2 years ago from Canada

Being a perfectionist is signature to a dedicated craftsperson. "The journey's end; the sweetest fruit on top an impossibly tall tree."

I did make note of some new stuff. I'll be having a look later.

M.F


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Bambi L'Amour 2 years ago from Brighton, UK Author

Thanks, it's a bit of paranoia mixed with having lots of new ideas constantly, so you're always changing and editing etc, I'm learning when to settle though :) There's some new stuff up if you're at all interested :)


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Mira Fang 2 years ago from Canada

Please don't second guess. You've got good stuff and it's worth sharing.


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Bambi L'Amour 2 years ago from Brighton, UK Author

Always, pure second guessing myself at the moment as regards everything.. but then, if folk can dig my linguistic diarrhoea I guess it's not so bad!!


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Mira Fang 2 years ago from Canada

Your work always leave me with a lingering sense of curiosity. Glad you are posting more!

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