A Flaming Doubt

Seen A Flaming Doubt Rise


but drained,

he turned a glinting eye,

almost with a hint of fascination,

at first he dared not try,

then he reached out

with all the piled up frustration,

his spirit would protest in a shout,

as he grasped his captor by the neck,

his captor leaned back,

not expecting the attack,


glared without fear,

with rifle in hand,

knew he had total command,

actually firing it,

common sense would sit,

causing a man’s demise,

but for the first time

in his criminal life,

seen a flaming doubt rise,

a sinner could never be a winner,

his body would shimmer

and his emotions would simmer,

as his superiority grew thinner.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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phdast7 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Frank - I really liked Frost Bite Would Show. Reminded meof novels I have read and moves I have seen where someone was slowly dying in the snow. Theresa

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Vivid images and very strong poetry!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

again thank you rahul bless you man!

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Frank Atanacio 14 months ago from Shelton Author

thanks phdast7 for reading Frank

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