A Fluttering Touch

A feeling came and took me by surprise

I feel so lucky as if I won a prize

It has been a while that I felt this flutter feeling

That had me floating until I reached the ceiling

 

A simple text to tell me he misses me so

A phone call placed to not say but show

I prayed for a man who would make me feel

A sensation, a touch that felt so real

 

I want him close whenever he is not by

He gives me a feeling that makes me sigh

Everyone asks how this could be so?

He makes you smile and you carry this glow

 

I let it be, without any questions asked

I follow my heart and my mind does the task

He tells me the sky is my limit

This feeling he gives I want to commit

 

Without a word spoken he describes emotion

With all his heart he places a notion

Lost for words in a state of sedation

Driven onto his land, I have arrived my destination

bellawritter23(copyright)2011

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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

Yup she's smitten to the toes! Sweet write, bella! May he always give you that flutter!


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Lucky man,with an judgemental glare I shake his hand.;)


Bellawritter23 5 years ago

Thanks both I found so many errors lol I guess he got me alltwisted lol..... Hahaha


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Both graceful and charming. Well done, again.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Hi bella,

A beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing it with us.

I loved it and i push all the buttons here.

Take care

Eiddwen.


Johnny Love 5 years ago

Love has a way of making us do and say things that would normally make me want to jump off of a bridge. DONT JUMP BELLA. Your words are divine as is your heart. Stay precious.. Johnny


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Bumpsysmum 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

I love this one Bellawritter23, "It has been a while that I felt this flutter feeling

That had me floating until I reached the ceiling"

Such a lovely feeling.....:-)


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

so very happy for you :)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautifully written. Love shines through.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Tnder, I know he will, there is no doubt in my mind. Thanks for showing me constant love as always!!

Acer, lol he feels lucky he tells me, and I say no your not lucky you are blessed!! Thanks acer as always...

birdie, Always a pleasure to read your comments :)

Eid, Thank you will be stopping by soon!!

Johnny, I will not dare to jump but if I do I know he will be standing there waiting to catch me...... thank you...

Bumpsys, Yes I haven't felt that in a long time as well I feel myself around him nothing to hide! Thank you....

Nikki. Thank you its a pretty great feeling


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Full of wonderful aspirations and dream-like. It is just what love feels like. Great poetry, I enjoyed this. When the person makes you want to reach your potential, that is a good sign, and so positive too.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Astra, I agree with every word you mentioned! Positive is always a plus....

smiles :)

bella


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

You deserve sooo much, my dear friend. I'm very happy for you.

It's a good thing you found somebody, I was about to jump off a cliff for you...


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

bb, Thanks I am glad too he kinda found me lol isnt that how its supposed to be?? But I was about to jump....lol not really but yeah

smiles :)

bella


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

We were going to jump together, but of course, as usual, my beautiful Robin would have tracked me down and put us back together...


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

I bet she would have lol ;)


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Love is grand! Glad you found it (or it found you). Doesn't matter which . . . just enjoy!!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

sally, Thanks a bunch, yes it found me

bella


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Hi bella, how I envy you, loves young dream. It is a long time ago since I had a touch of the flutters, but I can still hope.


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Lady Wordsmith 5 years ago from Lancaster, UK

That's some pretty powerful emotion there - I still get this feeling when I see Matthew McConaughey on screen (alright, he's probably a bit old for you, but he'll always have a place in my heart!)

Beautiful hub - you've described that flutter so perfectly :)

Linda.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Lady, Matthew McConaughey, gives me a fluttering feeling geez, I think he is so very handsome older or not I would definately agree with you on this one...... Thanks for reading!

smiles :)

bella


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Plarson 5 years ago from Alabama

Bella- This poem was a joy to read and made my heart soar for you. While I didn't know the exact details of the past you wrote about, I had my doubts you would find someone trustworthy enough to let inside your heart again. It gave me great cause to smile with pride as I read that man has indeed arrived. I give you kudos for taking that leap again. (Pssst- Hey mister, you hurt my adopted "little sis", and I am going to hunt you down and roll over you with my wheelchair!! lol) -P


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

P.,It has been a struggle within to not lash out at him with my anger as to he has never caused me any harm I am not one to hang around men or one man for too long because of my insecurities but I let him in and I love it. Oh and he knows better to ever hurt me lol he would have great penalties if they are implied.... ;)

smiles :)

bella

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