A Haiku - Forgiveness

A Haiku - Forgiveness

What must I do now?

Wrong steps along life's journey,

Marks left on my path.

Help me visualize

Thy snowstorm of forgiveness,


Wrongs done their once,

No matter so large or small,

Weighted down my soul.

True Judge, mercy please.

Their burdens are too heavy.

I would move on now.

I cling to the sound

of a Sacred Heart beating

for me, and for all.


Matthew 18:17-22


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

I like the message in these Haiku perspycacious. Thanks for sharing.

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sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

nice hub

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aviannovice 24 months ago from Stillwater, OK

You have written this so well, and delivered an important message.

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Perspycacious 24 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

aviannovice - I just realized that I had written what now are the final three lines, as a one sentence caption for the heart photo! So I moved them to become the final haiku and left the heart photo caption-less.

Thanks for commenting. Your comment brought me back here and to that realization! I fear I am beginning to think in haiku, even when I write a sentence!

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