A Haiku - Humility

Are there going to be arrogant people in Heaven?

"Pride goeth before the fall." What comes afterward is up to me.
"Pride goeth before the fall." What comes afterward is up to me. | Source

The secret to humility just may be failure.


Broken heart needed.

Contrite spirit needed, too.

Pride too high won't do.


I've tried lots of things.

Prayed to know His choice for me.

"Plant seeds that will grow."


Made "fishers of men",

Not fishes, not crops, but souls.

His will I will do.


A senior partner,

An easy yoke, shared burdens.

A younger brother.


A broken heart found,

Still beats strong, now happy too.

One soul leading on.


May my strength endure.

May my love be more perfect.

May I serve well, Lord.

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© 2012 Demas W. Jasper All rights reserved.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great poem, voted up and beautiful.


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

Beautiful.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Some very powerful haiku, I particularly liked the last two, I hope you achieve that for which you strives. God bless


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Perspycacious

"A broken heart found,

Still beats strong, and happy too.

One soul leading on."

Beautiful. Failure sure can give us a wake up call especially when we are arrogant.

Voted up and awesome.

Take Care :)


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I really liked you poem because it was very thoughtful.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Great poem. Love everything about it.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. I believe as long as we keep believing and trusting and staying on the straight and narrow the Lord will know we're good people. God bless.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Oh WOW, so beautiful!! vote way up


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

picklesandrufus: I believe you just gave me my 2000th Comment! That makes ME the lucky winner, and what a treasured Comment.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Sueswan: We all get "wake up calls" to keep us on track and on our toes. Good comment.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

tobusiness; Still striving and I expect that to be my lifetime pursuit. Thanks for the blessing and Comment.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

flashmakeit: Thought for thought; thanks for thinking about this one.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

carolinemd21: Love, one of our (us two) favorite topics. It makes the world go around, but sometimes in tailspins. Thanks for stopping by again.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Gypsy Rose Lee: Ahh, but the Lord also knows our potential and that is what he died for (that the things which hold us back from that potential might be forgiven) so we might be encouraged to keep on trying for the best we have to give.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

i love the last three lines Demas...awe inspiring...


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

raciniwa: To finish well, one need not start well (though that would certainly help.) It isn't where we came from; it's where we are headed.

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