A Haiku: Keeping Commandments

Gain all, or lose all, quite simple isn't it!

Each commandment has a blessing.  How many blessings do you want?
Each commandment has a blessing. How many blessings do you want? | Source

What is profit in regard to life?


I saw one lacking,

with naught save love for comfort.

I gave but lost not.

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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Very thought provoking Haiku. Nicely done!


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ChaplinSpeaks 5 years ago from Charleston, South Carolina

I love this haiku, Perspycacious! May you be blessed for giving.


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Perspycacious 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Giving of Self is the only true gift, isn't it.


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

beautiful haiku poem. voted up.


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kathryn1000 5 years ago from London

I like it.

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