A Haiku - Snow-Topped Valley

Two lips, snow and tulips....

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Snow-Topped Valley

Snow on high, green here;

Two lips, one white, one rainbow.

Mountain's spring glory.

Spring rain and rainbows....

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jhamann 19 months ago from Reno NV

You brought all of the amazing moments in the beginning of spring to light. Happy Haiku-ing! Jamie


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Perspycacious 19 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

jhamann - Haiku-ing is happiness.


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Besarien 19 months ago

Way to go packing a lot of imagery, meaning, and even a pun into a haiku. I know that is how it is supposed to be, but it is still a delight when it happens! I think you have a Haiku IQ.


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annart 19 months ago from SW England

Beautiful haiku and photos to match.

Ann


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Perspycacious 19 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Besarien - Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed the combination.


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Perspycacious 19 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

annart - I always wonder whether your pen name means you have a husband named art, of that your writings are a combination of you and your artfulness. Which is it, or is it something else?

Thanks for stopping by again and for taking the time to comment and score this one. The "Welcome" mat is always out for you.


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annart 19 months ago from SW England

How very perspycacious of you - it's both, designed to cover the art I do as well as the writing. Thanks for asking!

Ann


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Perspycacious 19 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

annart - You meant "very perspicacious of you," Perspycacious. Remember, there is usually a right and wrong of every choice. Say hello to Art for me.


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aviannovice 18 months ago from Stillwater, OK

In definite agreement. That picture is so perfect, too.

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