A Haiku - Spring Rain

Going and coming around....

Cycles consist of many parts of the whole.
Cycles consist of many parts of the whole. | Source

Love and Marriage...Rain and Flowers...



Rain from a dark sky,

Sprouts from loamy soil gardens.

Flowers bright with sun.


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Your haiku paints a picture and makes me look so forward to spring. Nicely done. Voted up, among others!


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Thanks VL. It is a dull, grey, rainy day here today, but the mind's eye can still display the sun-brightened glories of spring. Can you close your eyes and not have it "fade to black"?


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Great description of Mother natures work!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

I call Haiku the wise peoples poem , and for sure you have been in that group.

Great work .

Bless.


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moonlake 4 years ago from America

Enjoyed your haiku.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

This makes me long for spring flowers--but we need the rain this year so I am not complaining--nice piece!


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reikieffect 4 years ago

I loved your comparison of spring to love and marriage! Refreshing rain that nurtures the earth...and then the kids. Beautiful and up, sir!


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Nice Haiku!Makes me long for Spring!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

I really liked this Haiku. Looking forward to more. Made me think of spring on a gloomy, snowy day.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Great Haiku.. I am getting ready to try my hand with it.. I need prayer.. !! LOL.

debbie


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

You are still "the King of Haiku" on Hubpages!


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Perspycacious 21 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

I am so thankful for each of you who add a comment of your impressions.

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