A Haiku - The Almost Forgotten Valentine

The same gift...every day, always.

Rich or poor, He asks the same gift from all.
Rich or poor, He asks the same gift from all. | Source

Psalm 51:16-17

Other gifts won't do.

Our broken hearts we give Him.

Love eternal, true.


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

So many gifts he gives us. With faith our hearts will heal. There's a new love just waiting for us.

Beautiful kay

Sueswan 4 years ago

Beautiful and profound

I hope you are feeling better.

Voted up and away

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duffsmom 4 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

Well done - and well said.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

The gift of faith and belief in the Lord is the greatest gift of all.

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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond Author

Kay: His love is not just waiting for us, it envelopes us as we speak.

sue: doing better as whatever it was subsides and energy rises, make every day Valentine's Day, too.

duffsmom: for a poem to be considered "Well done - and well said" is high praise indeed!

Gypsy: the "greatest gift of all" which you mention, is in fact a gift we give ourselves from our broken hearts and contrite spirits. I know you agree, but we don't always think of it in that way.

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

i'm looking forward to the message behind this...the poll in which we need to vote...yes, at all times we need to acknowledge the loving presence of God...

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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Nice. Haiku based on the Psalms. Nice work.

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