A Hummingbird Haiku

The Delicate Hummingbird
The Delicate Hummingbird
Kissing a sweet Flower
Kissing a sweet Flower
Wings of Love
Wings of Love

The Hummingbird is

So small and so beautiful

She sings a sweet song




As friendships in life

She flutters so high and low

And stays not for long




Sadly sings, "Adieu"

When often she must fly far

But still she loves you.




Do not shed a tear

Her wings will sprout again soon

She'll stay awhile then




Think of this each day

And you will see a new sky

Holding her for you.




The hummingbird is a fascinating feathered friend that can entertain us in a peaceful & pleasant way. Just being outdoors and watching this petite bird fluttering around a feeder in your yard is a calming experience. Their gracefulness and colorful variety seem to attract any curious individual.

I have added a video below so that you can have the pleasure of seeing these lovely creatures in action. Enjoy!









A Beautiful sight to see

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fpherj48 15 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Oh heavens Au fait....I'm not a poet by any stretch. I've fooled around and wrote a few, just for variety. You're too kind.

I LOVE watching the birds, squirrels (we have Geese too. A Mama goose with her babies paddle down the creek) and the cutest little chipmunk that darts back & forth across the yard. He's always alone....no others with him. Must live in a bachelor pad under the deck! Butterflies and humming birds are my favorite. There's also a mean old Mr. Snapping Turtle who sits in the sun on a big rock in the middle of the creek. He hates it when we walk around down there...LOL (my grandkids & I)

Oh gosh....racoons galore & deer. The coyotes don't come anywhere near the edge of the woods. That's fine with me (and my cat!)

Our woodpeckers have done a real number on my redwood deck. They tap out holes everywhere! LOL... Good thing I appreciate nature and love animals...eh?

Thanks for the visit. You're the best. Peace, Paula


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Au fait 15 months ago from North Texas

It is a lot of work to feed humming birds. Years ago I used to put tons of feed out for every kind of bird and the squirrels and we even had possums and raccoons coming to visit. I kept the feeders full and fresh water available all the time.

Goldfinches are interesting to watch and the interaction between them all, birds, squirrels, etc., was interesting. We had a ladder back woodpecker, fairly large, and it would listen to one of the mouthy birds yap at it for about a minute at the longest and then it would rap that smaller bird on the head a few times with it's hammer beak. I got the impression the smaller bird was hassling the woodpecker. I really miss all my birds and little animals. They were always fun to watch.

I don't know how I missed this haiku. Didn't realize you were a poet, too. I've only written one poem and it's included in my article about wolf and warf spiders. Seems like there isn't anything you can't do and do well, Paula, and that's great. Enjoyed your little video too.

I have only a little while most days to answer comments and/or write, and that is why it takes me a while to get to everything sometimes. I'm sure you have a life apart from HP and things you must tend to before worrying about HP. I know you'll answer when you can. Hope you're having a good day . . .


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Michael-Milec 20 months ago

Thank you, thank you so much Paula, ~your reply is one of those helping me to reestablish once badly damaged self-confidence.

May the Lord bless and protect you.


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fpherj48 20 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Michael...You are special and such a pleasure to know. I love the sweet way you describe your thoughts & feelings......Thank you for visiting my Haiku!..........Peace, Paula


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Michael-Milec 20 months ago

Hello fpherj48

indeed enjoy-able both the Haiku as well as entertaining video. One line though 'do not shed a tear ' caused just opposite as I was envisioning a last fall picture of one 'left behind' - calling ( her ?) "he" who was during all season frequent visitor both on the feeder as well as on the flowers planted special for hummingbirds. ' He ' stayed in the area well past their departure time from our area ( last week in September), I was feeding him, bringing inside the feeder to melt a frozen water, just to note that on the first snowy day he never came back..."Thinking of this..." waiting to see the first one back again, in my mind it will be the same, wiping away my tear and we will have a happy new season.

On your masterpiece haiku voting up and beautiful.

Peace with us.


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fpherj48 23 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Hey!!! What's that you just dropped on my floor!?.......Tweet tweet, chirp chirp, Kaw-Kaw, Quack quack.......this is the only bird language i know.


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Sunshine625 23 months ago from Orlando, FL

Fluttering by to say hello to my Effer! :)


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you Nithya.....This was my very first attempt with Haiku. I always try to put forth an effort to try most things at least once. I appreciate your visit!


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Beautiful haiku about Humming birds, lovely pictures. Enjoyed reading and voted up.


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

I can definitely SEE that you do!! tweet tweet to you too!


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Tweet, Tweet ... Have I told you that I love hummingbirds and birthdays? Party on, Effer!


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

LOL, Deborah! That sneaky little bird! Thank you so much.......I appreciate all the sweet wishes!


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DeborahNeyens 2 years ago from Iowa

A little bird told me it was your birthday. Hope you have a fabulous day!


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Linda Sue

Melanie &

Audrey

Ladies....You're a TRIO of sweetness! Thank you for the wishes......It's not too late to get together and celebrate together!! Start out now, we'll meet in the middle somewhere!! Hugs to all of you!!


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vocalcoach 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Beautiful Effer - Have a glorious birthday. Wish I could take you out to celebrate. Big hugs to you!


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

Happy Birthday Paula! Yeah! lol!


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Happy Birthday to my favorite Effer!!! XOXO


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

I'm jealous. They are so beautiful.


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Totally awesome! Thank you. I know I'm going to have to try this.


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Here you go Effer. It's not the same video I watched, actually much more interesting! http://youtu.be/5qvbGWm6gmg


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

sujaya

perl

harish

wendy

I thank all of you for your interest in my haiku......Hummingbirds are loved by all. They are so sweet & delicate & unique! Have a wonderful day. Peace, Paula


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Wendy Krick 2 years ago from Maryland

very pretty.


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Audrey....Hello! This is old, actually, written 20 months ago. I believe Linda Sue recently shared it. Thank you so much for the nice compliment. I love Hummingbirds too...and have a feeder just off my back deck. They are adorable little birds.

Poetry never really interested me, much to my Dad's dismay. He wrote positively exquisite poems, songs, etc......a total Romantic. I was a rough, tough, scuff 'em up Tom boy.

Before joining HP, I did not even know what "Haiku," meant. This is my first and last attempt.......except I think I did Sunshine's Birthday tribute is in Haiku form......


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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Recently I watched a video of Hummingbird, it is such a sweet lovely bird and its wings are just awesome ! You have written a beautiful poem, Paula. Loved reading it and enjoyed and I recalled that video of Hummingbird.


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Purple Perl 2 years ago from Bangalore,India

Beautiful!


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sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

birds hv made u hum fp


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vocalcoach 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

I have humming birds galore all summer long. They are my favorite bird and THIS is my favorite haiku. Where did this come from? I've wanted to do this for a long time but nothing comes to me.

You are so gifted my precious friend. Have you written more? I would love to read them. You must create more of these magnificent wonders.

Please!!! Voted up and across and sharing. ~


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

haha, yeah damn peer pressure...God bless them.


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Jodah....I was so indifferent to poetry when I first joined, I had never even heard of a haiku. My trusty side-kick, Sunshine of course, filled me in....and Wayne & Rick encouraged me to try some poetry.

Gotta watch out for the "peer pressure" around here!! LOL


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Nell...They're so pretty and small.....and the way they flutter is hypnotizing!


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Hi fpherj48, I have always been in awe of hummingbirds and your haiku is wonderful. I have just written my first hub of haiku, and may be inspired to write more after reading this. Voted up.


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

I don't get to see hummingbirds over here, so just reading this was awesome Paula!


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fpherj48 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

How awesome! A hummingbird eating from a human's palm? Did the owners have it as a pet? I mean, like in a cage? I'm amazed that these sweet, delicate wild birds will interact with humans. I'd love to see that video...


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

I still haven't seen a hummingbird since the last time I told you I haven't, BUT I did see a video on Facebook of a hummingbird eating from the palm of it's owners hands. Awwww! I think it was a YouTube video. So cute!


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

OK Susan...if I keep agreeing to your suggestions...I'll do nothing but write all day, everyday. If only I had that privilege.....OH, but it is enough to have the privilege of knowing sweet people like you!


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Just Ask Susan 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

What a beautiful haiku!

I love writing haiku's too but so many of mine are so sad and depressing.

Have you written anymore? I'd love to read them. If you haven't you really should.


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Well....aren't YOU my favorite person of the day!!!! :) LOL. Thank you. The day before writing it, I had to ask what a HAIKU is!


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Laurinzo Scott 3 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

Couldn't tell it was your only, because it was very well crafted.


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thanks so much, Laurinzo......good to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed my one and only attempt at Haiku! :)


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Laurinzo Scott 3 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

What beautiful haiku... and the images to boot!!!


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

You crack me up, gf.....Thanks for coming by my lonely, quiet site......it's my own fault. I need to write. Aw shucks.....What's wrong with me??


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Sunshine625 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

It's been awhile since I visited your hummingbird haiku. I really, really want to see a hummingbird. I see lots of other birds...but, no hummingbird.

In response to your post above...yes! :)


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

A. C.......Thank you! I'm happy I could give you a break!


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American_Choices 3 years ago from USA

Superb! What a wonderful break you have provided for me today.


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Wow...really? Thanks, gf!


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Sunshine625 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

One of my favorite haiku's ever!!!


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Laurinzo...Thank you so much! Such Flattery. Now, I must confess. Before this Haiku, I did not even know WHAT a Haiku was. It could have been Chinese food, for all I knew.

I'm big on challenges. I did this to simply see if I could. It was first of TWO, and I've done no others since. The only reason I wrote the second, was in Honor of" Sunshine625's" birthday, in June. Which of course, will run again this coming June, when I host her next HubBirthdayParty!......... I appreciate your visit.


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Laurinzo Scott 3 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

Absolutely... undeniably fluid and beautiful... Wow!


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

You are welcome to visit whenever you like Vinaya......My Hummingbirds were glad to see you!! :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

I came back for a second read. It feels wonderful to read these beautiful compositions.

I hope you had a fantastic new year celebrations.

Cheers


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you ! Thank you ! I appreciate it !!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

i love it i love it so much! that was very beautiful!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Sunnie Day......I too, can watch the hummingbirds, drinking the nectar I leave for them....they are amazing little creatures....

Sunshine.....You can come sit on my deck with me!!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Sunnie has hummingbirds on her porch! I want one! :)


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

So beautiful fpher...and lovely...I watch the hummingbirds off my porch every morning and they never stop amazing me.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Well....fancy this....You are full of surprises, GF....Not only visiting me and my hummingbirds again, but sharing my hub! You are such a true gem!!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

I love hummingbirds and haikus! A perfect hub to enjoy both! :)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thanks, mrshoki......Go ahead...give it a try. I only dabble in a little poetry and obviously, haikus....Take care!


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mrshoki 4 years ago from New Zealand

Truly beautiful and very inspiring. I have never written poetry before but after reading this I just may have a go at writing something... Thank you!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you so much....they flutter beyond my deck, loving the nectar I put out for them.....so pretty and fascinating.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

A beautiful bird and beautiful haiku's - thank you and voted up!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you so much lyn......very glad you enjoyed my little haiku!


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craiglyn 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

I love hummingbirds - and I love this beautiful tribute!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you Ryem.....Funny thing you mention the hummingbirds coming back to me. It was simple. I actually put nectar in their feeder!! LOL.


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Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

This poetry is so beautiful and sweet. I hope the humming birds come back to you!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

AWWWWW shucks, Rick...ya make me blush......but I don't know about more poetry from me...I don't think it's quite my cup o tea.......I keep forgetting to fill the feeder with nectar....my humming birds have left me a poison-pen note and told me to stick my haiku where the sun don't shine.........Thanks,PF!!


Poetic Fool 4 years ago

Well, Paula! I am impressed! What a beautiful haiku and the photos are awesome. I love hummingbirds. They are about my favorite birds to watch. I wrote a hummingbird haiku as well but it pales compared to yours. I hope we get the pleasure of reading a lot more poetry from you. Voted up and more!


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

This was a beautiful and well presented haiku. Voted up and beautiful. Best wishes.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you Vinaya......I appreciate your interest in my Hummingbird Haiku!!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I loved these pieces. Beautifully done.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

Well look at you! Writing Haiku! Very good! WB


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

HouseBuyersUS.......Thank you so much. Yes, they are a pretty bird and of course, unique......My hub has served to remind me to keep their feeder filled with nectar.........I've had numerous customer complaints lately!!! lol


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HouseBuyersUS 4 years ago from Centreville, Virginia, USA

Hi fpherj48...

Nice hub on Hummingbird Haiku...it is a colorful and beautiful bird...


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thanks, Coge.....I just saw a little humminbird this morning......fluttering around my empty feeder! I don't think she was happy.


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Cogerson 4 years ago from Virginia

Very nicely done....I liked how you put this Haiku together....and who does not like hummingbirds...voted up and awesome.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

suzzycue.....You got my message!! Thank you! Must be true that great minds think alike!! lol


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suzzycue 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

I love Hummingbirds and this is a great tribute to them. It paints a picture of motion, beauty, trust and love.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you for recognizing how very "clever" and original I am, Michael!! LOL People say, "Duh," a lot to me.....


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molometer 4 years ago

Dooh! Sweet name for sugar birds lol


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Why, Thank you, Alastar......I appreciate your visit..and I do believe you are correct about that "good medicine for the spirit," because they always make me smile and think Happy thoughts!


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Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

Charming haiku effer! So well it expresses the joy on seeing these delicate creatures of nature. Thinking of them is good medicine for the spirit.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

How lucky can a girl be? Two of my favorite guy-hubbers! lol.....Good to see you both!

That's not a coincidence, alocsin.....I wrote this just for the hummingbird outside your window!

Sugar birds? I hate to be corny, but that's a sweet name for a hummingbird.......I call them my little Flutter-babies. I'm glad this brightened your day, Molo..


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molometer 4 years ago

Hi Paula,

This haiku is beautiful. I used to love watching the hummingbirds in my garden in Cape Town. Locally they call them sugar birds. Wish I could write Haiku like this. I'm just a tech head I guess. Each of us has our roles to play. Yours is to brighten or day. Thanks for sharing.

All the appropriate votes cast.


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alocsin 4 years ago from Orange County, CA

Coincidentally, I'm looking at a hummingbird outside my window as I read this. Both text and image match. Voting this Up and Beautiful.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

LADIES!!! Martie and Nell Rose......My South African and English friends........You are both so damned sweet and lovable I think my next haiku will be about you!! Thank you so much. I always enjoy seeing you both! Aries women are soooooo awesome!


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

lol! no we don't have them over here, apart from special places like Kew Gardens, such a shame I would love to see one!


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

I often see Hummingbirds in my garden - but I am always too late to take photo's.

As I am always the last one to arrive at a hub.

My dear co-Aries, Paula the Prettiest, these poems of yours are vivid and profound and you KNOW I love you too.

Hugs to you and yours :)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Maria.....You may be the only person I know, who can combine, English, red neck twang and French in one comment...and get away with it!! LOL

Jeez........You even know Butter Pecan is one of my top 2 favorites!!

Nell Rose......Hi there! Jools, whom, as you probably know, is from your Country....tells me you don't have Hummingbirds there?? I'm so sorry for you......they're so fun to watch.....but if they like WARM climate, I wonder where they go for the winters up here??? Can you imagine them "fluttering and humming" all the way down South????


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Love your Humminghbird Haiku, they are such beautiful little birds, and your words just said it all, beautiful!


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Why you effer... I know one thang for sure...

the butter pecan icecream (or whatever pleases y'all) is on moi... cuz I cannot think of a nicer way to spend the afternoon... with good friends.

Peace, Love and Icecream to y'all, Maria

PS-- Enjoy every moment with that precious baby boy, Joseph Alexander!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Glad to know lord's REAL name......"Joseph"...and a fine Biblical name it is. My brand new (5 days old) precious Grandson is "Joseph Alexander." He is PERFECTION in the flesh.

Maria and Joseph.....I guess you'd have to know me really well to know that the very last thing I would intentionally do is kick up a storm or cause a ruckus......which appears I just may have done here.

Joseph....yes, I do talk a lot and ask a lot of questions. This is a bad habit and I know it is. I'm glad to at least know why you deleted me.... .....You realize, Joseph, that being "deleted" in HubVille is like being....."kicked to the curb".......isn't it?? LOL! (Now I'm kidding)

Maria.....You are a marvelous negotiator (?) is that we call it these days? Whoa...as Daisy would say, "What a dern trubble-maker I am!!" Ah say sorry to mah Kinfolk!

You folks are fine individuals........I mean..."good peeps"........

The reality is....I need people to be patient with me.....I'm really doing well for an old Great Granny, locked in a tower, all alone with no friends or contact with any of my peasant pals from the kingdom.

Maria......don't try to fool me.....There is NOTHING you do not know!! Peace, Love and Ice Cream.............Effer


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Well, there's much this ole marcoujor doesn't know but she does know "good peeps"...

Paula and Joseph = "good peeps"

And that's what I'm talkin' about! Love ya both, Maria


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

My dearest Friend. apologizing publicly to you. Yes mea culpa! Did erase comments that somehow touched my feelings. I just want to tell you that I recognize my error. Human we are indeed my friend. Just told Mari Jordan, that I did erase 2 comments because you kept coming back for answers, and we are not God like. We are as playful as any kid. This Haiku is like from heavens, your word are well crafted and took us to the end. You are a wonderful writer indeed! Cheers!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

You write wonderful comments in the morning after coffee!!! I can't even function in any capacity BEFORE coffee!! I hear you!

Thanks so much!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Effer, you are good at the ole haiku! I love this tribute to the hummingbird and the comparison to friendships. The photos are gorgeous, too.

I'm sorry about your sister, too. I'm amazed by your resilient and positive spirit. See you soon! :-)


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

I heart you Effer J.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

teaches......Yes...exactly.... "Friends may come and friends may go".....I think the rest of that is....."But a "SISTER" IS A LIFETIME FRIEND."

I'm glad you appreciated my haiku!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Linda Sue....I guess we're lucky. We have lots of Hummingbirds in the are, but in order to get them close to your home, it really takes the right type of feeder......

Unfortunately, I don't get to see many due to my dogs and cats always hanging around. In fact, the only bird feeder that attracts any sort of winged friends is one that we have put on the other side of the property, hung really high up.

Birds are not stupid, that's for sure......I wish I was a bird!!

Thanks for your comment.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

This is a wonderful poem and so well written on the subject of friendship. It is true that some go up and down and in and out of your life.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thelma

Cyndi

LaThing

How very nice of you ladies to read my Hummingbird Haiku and think it is beautiful.......I hope it's as beautiful as your hearts.

Thelma! I'm glad you're OK....I could have sworn you and Louise went over the Cliff!!! Whew! Landed on a cloud, eh?


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Ruchira! Hello...I've missed you. Of course I know it's all my fault with the technical issues I've been having.....what a headache! For a while, I thought I was a HUMMINGBIRD........or is that Cuckoo Bird??!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

I love hummingbirds. They are so beautiful. I rarely get to see them except in photos and hubs, so thank you Effer for a fab haiku featuring my favorite birds! :)


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

OK, please drive safely to pick up those boys...

Never "meaning to be mysterious"...

LUCKY Cats is my dear friend Kathy. I could not help but read your comments back and forth.

I think you also are referring to my good homey (the LORD). He is very very smart... (usually...hee-hee!) I would trust the LORD with my life.

Love you, Paula... Maria


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Maria.....I need to ask....Is "lucky" your alter-ego...your inner spirit/voice or a real friend?

Your second paragraph made me catch my breath! Yours is the 2nd rather "prophetic-sort' of comment I received in just a few days. What I mean to say is, the comments ring to me quite like a psychic reading.

Perhaps I'm spending too much time in cyber space?...lol....I'm just saying.......

I always TRY to be gentle to myself, but as my life and schedule will hear nothing of "pampering" one's self...it seems to be more of a struggle than it's worth.

Like right this minute!!! I should be on the road driving to pick up 2 of my favorite boys in the whole world from the summer recreation bus!! MOVE IT, Gram Dawg!!!

Bye, Maria.......until the next time! Thank you sooooo very much for your warmth and sweetness.

Hugs to you........Effer


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Oh Paula, my dear woman,

The more I learn about you... LUCKY has a way of drawing people out (she has been my bud from waaaay back).

May you be extra gentle to yourself this month and surround yourself with those who love you... so many old and NEW friends, as well as the exquisite beauty of nature that speaks to us in so many ways as we allow ourself to listen.

You can surely 'do haiku'... it exudes from your heart and now I know why... Voted UP and very beautiful, like you. Love, Maria


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

This is beautiful, Paula!! Such nice flow of words, and those pictures are just perfect. Thanks for sharing ......


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

Such sweet haiku and lovely photos to match the verses. I envy anyone who can attract hummingbirds to their gardens. They are wonderful to watch.


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Thelma Alberts 4 years ago from Germany

Beautiful! I love it. Thanks for sharing.


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

aww...love these hummingbirds and love your haiku, paula.

my kid is fond of these little birds and wants those special humming bird feeder in our backyard...let's see :)

many votes and sharing it across


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Shucks, POP....for that I think I'll buy at the Inn tonight!!

SUZETTE...Hi! Good to see you again...it's been since Penn State, eh? What a damned messy fiasco that turned out to be for several ....shall we say.....irresponsible individuals?

I'm so glad you like my Haiku......Thank you!! PEACE!


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful haikus and beautiful subject. The photos are precious of the hummingbirds. Your words are so eloquent. Thanks for sharing with us!


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breakfastpop 4 years ago

You are quite welcome. You made my day too!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

GOSH!!! Ladies....Tammy, ignugent & POP.......I'm honored and humbled.... Frankly, I am so new to this....I don't think I appreciate whether a Haiku will be well-received or not. I'm finding out. Thank you soooooo much.........Made my day!


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breakfastpop 4 years ago

What lovely poetry. Up and beautiful!


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Love your hummingbirds. This is like a song in my ears and it really calms the heart. Thanks fpherj48 for sharing.


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

This is just gorgeous. I love little humming birds. I saw a very strange one with a tubular nose here in NC. Still trying to figure out what it was. Loved it!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

You're just so rational and wise......Bless your heart, Jools......not to mention sweet and compassionate..


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Aw, I would love them but I would set them free....and they'd fly back to warmer climes :o)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you Jools! Shall I ship you a cage full of hummingbirds???


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Ef.fer - Wonderful haiku about such a wonderful bird. We don't have them in the UK (shame!). You gave that sense of their flitting and fluttering in and out of our eye space just right :o)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Ahhhhhh DUH......wake up, Paula! No, Tillie, I hadn't noticed about Amazon..........I've had so many issues for the past 3 weeks, my head is spinning. Slowly but surely, I and HP are getting things repaired and/or figured out........Is this happening to other hubbers....or am I once again the Lone Ranger??!

Thanks so much for the comments, BTW.......I always appreciate your input...it means a lot to me, Til!!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

I bet you thought I wasn't coming? How could I not read your magnificent haiku? Your talents are just flying around GF.

This is a beautiful haiku and so touching too...we all know you've picked one of my favorite subjects AND you linked to one of my hubs! Amazing ;) Now, I'll have to go back and link to yours....payback and all that.

Seriously, voted up, awesome and beautiful!

Just FYI ...have you noticed no Amazon links are showing up? They say no data found, And, when I clicked on your link to my hub I get various adds? Seems the Gremlins are afoot!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Thank you so very much. I would bet you are a lot better at Haiku than you might think! It surprises me that I seem to have become comfortable with it and basically, any style of Poetry, which I'd not ever shown an interest in before recently.

Don't give up....you are very talented......Have a wonderful week-end! Peace


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sweethearts2 4 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Awesome job for a newbee at Haiku- I practice and practice and just can't get it. Heartwarming reference to friendships. As always you're impressive


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Josh......Coming from the Master of Haiku, I am highly flattered...thank you!

B Lucy........So glad this made you smile......Keep smiling!! Peace.


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B Lucy 4 years ago from Podunk, Virginia

Aww . . this made me smile.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Paula,

Beautiful haikus here! Awesome indeed! I was very impressed while reading them. Amazing job here friend! :)


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Lisawilliams and

Glitter twin fan

I say Thank you to both of you and I'm relying on the fact that you are well-versed in "poetry" and haikus etc.....because I am certainly a "beginner"......clicking and thinking blindly...... Peace!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Hey....picky picky Tex......I just recently learned what a haiku is and the whole damned History and yadda yadda....and now you tell me it's a quatrain.....? You got splainin to do.......I could look it up, but you're the one who started this!! Obviously you did not read my Hub, Poetry is Greek to Me.........I'm crushed.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Dexter, My man, who writes the funniest conversations on line! Hope you've been well.......Thank you for the nice compliment!! Hello to Barry and Michele!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Lucky Cats...you are too sweet. I appreciate your kind and consoling words. It will be 9 years this month and each day of these years, I have thought of her, in one way or another and missed her until my heart feels like it weighs a ton. She was more than my sister.....my friend, my confidante, my idol....my dearest, closest friend. Our bond, even now, is indestructible.

You, my dear have seriously exposed your love of nature! Seems like a wonderful thing to love!! Peace, my lady.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Let's see...hmmm.who's next? AhA! 'tis William...my ever-faithful Bird lover/watcher/photographer.........(please send definition of "modesty," teach?) Thanks

I am so glad you enjoyed my haiku. Truth is, I did not even know what a Haiku was until a few months ago. I may have tried to find it on a Chinese menu.........and between you and me, buddy, our pal "texshelters" is throwing around the word "quatrain,"........think he's just showing off? Quick, send that definition too!

How much thought did you give to placing a CAT near a hummingbird? Did you never watch Sylvester and Tweety bird? I tawt U taw it!!!..............................Peace!


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

That was quite lovely!


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Lisawilliamsj 4 years ago

This is a beautiful and well written Haiku, I voted up!


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texshelters 4 years ago from Mesa, Arizona

I like this. It's sweet. But I would call it a quatrain, not a haiku. Yea, picky picky.

PTxS


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Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

Hummingbirds are beautiful and so is this Haiku!


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

I am so sorry to hear about your sister. Such a great loss. I have two brothers, but no sister...I Always wished I'd had a sister. I am very sorry you lost her.

This year, I decided to volunteer w/the local Wildlife Rescue Center in my county. Each week, I help out in the clinic, where tiny "nudies," larger nestlings and fledglings are housed in either incubators, heat boxes or wired cages. We help injured birds, too...it has been so rewarding and I've learned so much. I never knew, until I moved to SE Kansas and met the Swallows, and then, upon returning home, how much I like, even love birds. They are magical and their songs so sweet. Anyway, I just wanted to share this with you to underscore how I relate to your love of these beautiful beings. Kathy


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Look at you, delving into the realm of haiku....and doing it damn well I might add! Please, no modesty...this is very good work.

Now consider this: I happen to love hummingbirds and I happen to think you are the cat's meow, so maybe my opinion is a tad tainted....but not by much.

Great job Paula! Voted up and away, as an old Hub friend used to say!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Your poem is a delight to read. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Hello Frank!! And no doubt, the hummingbirds like YOU!!


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York Author

Lucky Cats... I am overwhelmed by your kind and generous comment. It is obvious you have a sincere appreciation for our world of birds.

My sister and I had always talked of becoming involved in nature walks, discovering wild flowers and educating our selves on "birds, birds, everywhere." ...once we had both retired.

Tragically, we lost my precious sister to cancer a few years ago.....but in her honor, I make sure to spend time "in nature" even if it is simply marveling at the flight of a butterfly.....it makes me feel close to Pat and brings me peace. Thank you so much, lucky..........


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

just like the hummingbirds beautiful voted up


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Lucky Cats 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

Oh! pfherj48! I am in awe of the Haiku you've written in honor and delight w/beautiful Hummingbirds. Everything is just right. These words, too, bring to mind my deep love for Swallows...in SE Kansas, our Barn Swallows return ever year, in late March or early April. Just as you've described so beautifully here, their presence is like a good friend; their winsome ways are so touching and, their stay is far too short. This year; my friend Al tells me, the Swallows are not reproducig as much due to the extreme heat. He keeps several bird baths filled w/fresh, cool water for them but, they aren't nesting as much . I miss seeing them . I hope to visit shortly, and am praying for cooler, rain soaked weather for the sweet Swallows and all the other birds and animals there. Lovely, Beautiful, Awesome.

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