A Journey Towards God


A Journey Towards God

I will walk on the stony road of my life.

I will go armed in teeth.

Then I will sow the seed of my deeds,

irrigate it with pure water.

Then in the autumn

I would enjoy the green meadows.

And have a bed of roses;

with a fine pillow of peace.

Then death would choose me for a walk;

An eternal walk_______

And there would be only me and my God.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Welcome to hubpages and this is such a lovely expression of a journey that you have mentioned. I could picture it quite vividly. Looking forward to more of your hubs. :)


Nayyar Afaq 5 years ago

A beautiful poem, composed brilliantly :)


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks a lot Nayyar for reading and appreciating my poem.


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Many many thanks qudsia for encouraging me.


Fahad 5 years ago

Really such a deep effort...

i have just read the poem and gave the comments,

but i can't reach in the depth


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks fahad for reading this poem.Read again again then you would understand the meaning of the poem.if not then wait to pass from the journey of self accountability.


Maria Sarmad 5 years ago

Beautiful poem. Keep up the excellent work !


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks a lot maria for reading and appreciating my poem.bundle of thanks.


Iftikhar 5 years ago

a soul touching poem---keep it up


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Naomi's Banner 5 years ago from United States

Gorgeous, welcome to Hubpages!!


Fahad 5 years ago

Hmmmm.....

you are right Sister, Last one is the only way.

But, seriously..... as Mr. Iftikhar said, its "soul touching"

I am fully surprised to see your thought.


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TroyM 5 years ago

Well written poem... Thanks!


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

thanks troy for appreciation


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Seafarer Mama 5 years ago from New England

Lovely, earthy expression of your life journey. Very romantic and poetic...and peaceful. :0)


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks mama for liking my piece of poetry.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Wow! Quite philosophical and thoughtful!


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks uban for stopping and commenting on my hub.


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pstraubie48 5 years ago from sunny Florida

...and as you end your poem, 'just me and God' at the end..that should offer comfort to those of us who believe...and awe and wonder...i so admire a poet...and thanks for stopping by to visit me...


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pstraubie48 5 years ago from sunny Florida

...and as you end your poem, 'just me and God' at the end..that should offer comfort to those of us who believe...and awe and wonder...i so admire a poet...and thanks for stopping by to visit me...


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

how sweet and beautiful.. Just me and My God.. is so nice.. I like that... He is special.. I voted up and beautiful.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Beautiful asmaif. As he walks with you , even now ,I can also understand why you can rest assured:

And there would be only me and my God.

Quite beautiful,and it's simplicity makes it even more appealing.

Bless.


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asmaiftikhar 4 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks sky for liking my effort.


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Brett Winn 4 years ago from US

Beautiful!!!


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asmaiftikhar 4 years ago from Pakistan Author

thanks Bret for liking my hub.


anndavis25 4 years ago

So poetic. Everyone has an intrepretation, but to me it meant reaping the seeds you sew...

Loved it Asmaiftikhar.

Up and beautiful


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asmaiftikhar 4 years ago from Pakistan Author

Thanks anndiv for liking my hub.


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ubanichijioke 4 years ago from Lagos

Great piece, you shared a sentiment we all can't deny but how do we prepare for the inevitable journey to the world beyond should be our utmost need. Great piece.

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