A Little Love Poem

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Ill stop loving you,

When diamonds never sparkle & flowers never grow,

When thunder never echoes & rivers never flow,

When hearts no long wonder & hands are never held,

When smiles are only memories & hope is never felt,

When trees no longer blossom & the sun refuses to shine,

Ill never stop loving you untill the end of time.


Thank you for reading,

Lou x

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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

To be in love is such a wonderful feeling..

Beautifully expressed!

Voted up


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Simba73 4 years ago from UK

lush


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Aw.. The sweet sentiments of love. Well expressed here, Lou. Eternity awaits for that sweet love.


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Just to point out that the title has a typo: Peom instead of Poem.


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

Thanks lol ill change it. :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful as always.True love stop until the last flower dies.I voted up.


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

Glad you liked it James :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Sorry,Laura. I didnt read you for awhile.


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

Don't worry about it hon, I've been busy writing more chapters to whisper's and I have also started another novel because that one is driving me crazy.


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

You mean you are not going to finish it?


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

of course i will finish it, i'm just taking a small break from it, I have that many idea's i keep confusing me self so i'll have a break and then go back to it and hopefully finish it this time. I'm going to email a piece from my newest novel so you can preview it and tell me what you think to it so far :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Ok,I will see if it needs some finishing touches :)


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

It's the first draft so yeah it probably will :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

I read it ,I liked it.It was great.Thumbs up:)


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

Yay :) sent you the second to preview, I dont think im doing bad considering im not used to writing S e X scenes.


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

I ll check it now


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

:) canot wait for ye input on it :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

That chapter was perfect and so great.You are good at that field;)


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lou2212 4 years ago from barnsley, UK Author

I can honnestly say, i have shocked my self :)


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

No no,it s alright.it s natural and not that embarassing:)In the future,you will find yourself at ease exploring not only this but other taboos as well:)

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