A Message Left From His Mother

Sun dimly set brought such crimson color to the sky
Continue brighten the daylight as moon prepare to replace the sunlight
While strolling her baby from the shopping mall
To her car

A strange man stood by with a gun beside
Randomly shooting people
And she shield her baby from being hit
By flying bullets

Shielding her baby on his stroller like an armor protecting the king
She grab her cell phone and wrote a message
As tears form her eyes when three bullet struck her body

Tightly continue wrapping her baby body
Let each bullet struck her before hitting her only child
She died beside her baby body
With her cell phone clinched in her hand

Police and medical responder came to view
And found her baby survive
With a message left from his mother
“If you can survive, remember I love you and your important to my life”

The message was being passed on from one responder to the next
Brought tears to their eyes and realize
That a value of a mother is more than many have realize

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VENZKHVAM 5 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

Chanroth you Dont get time to interact too much now.Are you busy in your studies.Any way all the best.

This poem has once again reiterated that as long as you have your wonderful mother along with you no evil force can stop from destroying you.

I liked reading this and thanks for sharing with us.

I had voted this interesting

with warm regards

Dinesh Nair.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

awww...Dinesh, I'm so sorry! I been busy study for my midterm and working. I just got home from work and take a little peek at my hub to see what is new. But thank you! :0)


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VENZKHVAM 5 years ago from Milk way galaxy, trying to find a more adventurous place in another galaxy with my great followers

Nothing I just having fun commenting your poems. and wish you all the best in your studies. I want you to be topping in your medicals and became a best medico apart from being my favourite poetess.

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