A New Haiku to a Lady of Liberty

The message of hope to fly.
The message of hope to fly.


She stands in splendor,

in harbor's waters, so deep,

Her message remains,

in her visage, she does keep.


Despite tears that stream,

Over years, as it may seem.

Her lamp she holds high,

A message of hope, to fly.



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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

A beacon of freedom for the entire world. Well done my friend! May she always be the symbol of liberty.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

The lady in the harbor will always stand in our hearts even when she has gone and to have withered away.whonu


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

And forever more!


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks bravewarrior, Bless you. whonu


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Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

"Her message remains,

in her visage, she does keep.."

The freedom we still cherish despite everything. Well done. :-)


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thank you Genna, I'm so glad that you stopped by for a read. whonu


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Her message is one that holds high and flys for many who need the hope. Great poem and very inspiring as a patriotic thought.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks teaches, and appreciated in your kind words. whonu


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Brilliant my dear friend and here's to so many more to follow.

Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thank you Eiddwen, and may you have a wonderful day. whonu


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Interesting "Haiku" style.

Your poem is deep and profound.

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