A Plead of Apathy - Original Poem

The autumn can never complain; they are not supposed to.

They can only be jealous of the serene seasons.

However, the fact lies in the biggest lie

That the autumn dies no more for a reason


A plead of apathy was returned undone

Into the misty and gloomy oblivion

And when the dark blood flows beneath the river

The humanity suffers, and the lovers shiver


The high skies do not wish anymore, for the goodness I guess

I guess they are tired enough of all these pricks

But In this dying world; the ever-reluctant will (Will = Desire)

Somehow always manages to trick


I tried the same; I tried exactly the same

But the nature tricked me and I woke up on a different note

I was befooled by the beauty and the glamour

And later missed the life that was indeed too short


I thought the nature could wait, to delay the inevitable

I thought the death could wait, to be more generous and pleasurable

But a plead of apathy - along with me - was returned undone,

And I was sent back to the misty and gloomy oblivion.

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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Beautiful/UP/Awesome/Sad!!


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Ardie 4 years ago from Neverland

Wow, this is actually the first I've read by you and let me say it again WOW. Your words moved me and dragged me into gloomy oblivion. I followed sunshines lead, up and beautiful with a mix of awesome. Now on to follow you :)


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Dee42 4 years ago from Beautiful Arkansas

Great hub, beautiful.


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Hunbbel Meer 4 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Sunshine625, Dee42: Thank you :)

@Ardie: Thank you :) I hope you will take the time off to read some of my other hubs as well :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

"I thought the death could wait, to be more generous and pleasurable" awesome line.

Sad but beautifully written.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Good sad poem.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is haunting and sad...


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

It is a long time since we have seen something from you my friend.

A sad writing but beautiful


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Long time no see, my friend, Hunbbel, and this poem makes me wonder as to exactly what happened. And here is an update for you, an interested reader of my short story in three parts, it is now a novel over 63,000 words, hopefully in its final edit.

Welcome back!

James W. Nelson


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Hunbbel Meer 4 years ago from Karachi, Pakistan. Author

@Vinaya, writer 20, always exploring, rosemay50: Thank you very much :)

@Subron7: Tough and hectic schedules keep me out of this Eden garden :( and I am very happy for your novel my friend :) best of luck.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

Beautiful poem Hunbbel...Hey, where have you been?been missing you here...welcome back...


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Hunbbel

Great to see you. :-)

"I tried the same; I tried exactly the same

But the nature tricked me and I woke up on a different note

I was befooled by the beauty and the glamour

And later missed the life that was indeed too short"

Beauty can be deceiving.

Voted up and away!

Happy New Year.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

excellent poetry and awesome Glen Hansard video. He's one of my favories and Once is one of my favorite films!

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