A Poem Called FML

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FML


There once was a day

When I could say

I truly have lots of friends


Then the day came

When it wasn’t the same

Those friendships all came to an end


I’d make stupid mistakes

In a lot of dumb ways

But I am never forgiven


They’re held against me

A million and three

Like letting one go is forbidden


I always forgive

It’s the way I must live

Although I don’t find it returned


They’ll never forget

My trespassing debt

And I'm punished by all concerned


And my family will be

At the hanging tree

Rooting the process along


They’ll stop talking to me

Behind doors they’ll be

And I don’t know what I’ve done wrong


They’ll remember forever

And treat me with clever

Punishments made up by them


In the midst of these people

Even under the steeple

I’m alone, un-forgiven and dead


The last days have come

And there’s no where to run

So here is my wish for them all


That they are all forgiven

‘Cause Jesus has risen

They’ll not live the lonely they caused

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giftedwriter86 4 years ago from new castle ,de

nice poem! the flow is a little misleading to me,but still very nice work with whole thing!


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SandyMcCollum 4 years ago Author

Aw, thanks GW! Can you tell me what is meant by a misleading flow? I want to correct that, whatever it is.

ETA: Funny, my account shows one comment and no views Hahaha!


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giftedwriter86 4 years ago from new castle ,de

NO problem! I guess to me your words that connect your next line while making sense, kinda take away from the poem. I guess bc i do the same thing thats why i am telling you. Its no biggie tho i still think it was a great poem. I just wanted to share my 2 cents!


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paradigmsearch 4 years ago from USA

This is the first poem I ever tweeted and facebooked. I thought it truly excellent.


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giftedwriter86 4 years ago from new castle ,de

It is really good. I like it alot !


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MjNicole 4 years ago from North Richland Hills, TX

Great poem, I enjoyed it.

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