A Priceless Gift

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Oh morning star,
you shine so bright,
lone sentinel,
of dawning light.
Your gentle glow
a beacon to
escort the day
yet born anew.

O morning star,
you gem so rare,
herald of
the morning fair.
a diamond in
the velvet sky,
you beckon dawn
as she draws nigh.

o morning star,
with strength anew,
you greet the day
in grand debut.
a whispered hope
to all below,
a priceless gift
you do bestow.

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Fiddleman 5 years ago from Zirconia, North Carolina

Beautiful


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

You have the gift.

Well done.

Up and beautiful!


RHeydrich 5 years ago

Quite good. Simple, yet elegant. I can't wait for more.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Fiddleman, thank you. A morning star is worthy!

WillStarr, thank you, Kind Sir!

RHeydrich, thank you, thank you!


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

the morning star a beautiful sight and a great write

God Bless


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

vet, thank you! I so appreciate your comment!


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CMCastro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

Tndrhrt, You are a gifted poet. I just think its neat that we both thought of writing about gifts around the same time tonight. Your poem here is truly elegant and the colorful pictures are gorgeous. Have a peaceful night! CM


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epigramman 5 years ago

......well I must sincerely repeat everything that

CMCastro just said - and that your writing and friendship is a priceless gift to me ......


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thank you, CMCastro! God's gifts are so awesome! And you are one of them!

Epigramman, you are a priceless gift to me as well!


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

This is a lovely tribute to a lovely sentinel. With your pen "a priceless gift you bestow"...on us. Thank you.


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Bijosh 5 years ago from from the cosmic sea, sustaining life and radiating purity.

A nice poem about the morning star, great work.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

SilentReed, thank you for your comment, and it is my joy, indeed!

Bijosh, thanks dor the read and comment. I am glad you enjoyed it!


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carrie450 5 years ago from Winnipeg, Canada

Beautiful poem tnderhrt23 and I love the photos that go with it.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Carrie, yes I love the photos too!


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b. Malin 5 years ago

Lovely rich Poem, with beautiful pictures, makes my day! Thanks for sharing.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

b. Malin, I am so glad! Thank you for your read and lovely comment!


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Very pretty poem to match the pretty pictures!


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Fossillady! The morning star is an awesome thing!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Voted up, up and away, Beautiful


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Thank you, Ruby! You are a sweet gal!


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

In simple terms... "Beautiful!"


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago Author

Romancer, thank you!

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