A Shadow Passed


My feet were hurting,

I was tired and weary,

and the street was quiet and dreary,

though a shadow passed

a long way off,

with a bright, black umbrella,

I clenched my teeth,

holding back a dry cough,

the rain had abated,

and it was a bit mild,

these were terms that nature hated,

people watched me from a window,

from a building along side the road,

to them I looked wild,

and I turned towards the skies,

because I knew I was too poor

for their watchful eyes,

some would pray,

others threw small change my way,

mostly as a cheap trick,

not caring at all that I was weak and sick,

my mind kept spinning and my thoughts turning,

and my stomach was burning,

because I was starved,

every sin in my mind started reeling,

I thought of robbing, stealing,

killing,

but I wasn’t that type of man,

my eyes grew tired and red,

the hunger was a sickness

that stuck to my stomach and head,

they turned off their lights,

clothed and fed,

and wondering if people like me

were just better off dead.

© 2011 Frank Atanacio

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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Brilliant perceptions! The view of the homeless and starved touch the very soul through your words.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

No not better off dead , it is the best way a discription could be said by you. Frank.

You captured this so effortlessly, the hubber "AE" she wrote a similar piece . Goes to help look into the mind of mankind.

That why those who give in to being , men that think and practice evil , will soon find out , more about this life.Their own.

And I remember you writing about that Florida mother also.

Bless.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

once again..thank you Senoritaa and Sky I will check on AE's version of this type of poem good looking out :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

The subject matter!


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ssmith1534 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

wow...love your discriptions! very captivating!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

Got it Sky.. and thank you for stopping by ssmith :)


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Hyphenbird 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

I actually have heard people say such things and it makes me feel such outrage. Oh Frank, this is a beautifully sad and open voice on a taboo subject. Society convinces itself that the food kitchens and shelters are taking care of these people. We know that is not true. Bless you for caring and bringing the truth into the open light of day.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

that was such a wonderful comment H.. :)


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dadibobs 4 years ago from Manchester, England

This is the problem with the fake beggars. The true homeless people get overlooked. Great hub.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks for stopping by dadibobs :)


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Cara.R 4 years ago from New York

Beautiful Frank, Great imagery... That look in their eyes, what they might be feeling. The pain on their face, begging for change and looking ashamed.

Giving them money never seemed like enough, when I would walk away I would think if they would be warm enough during the night.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Such a sad heart wrenching poem because it is so true. Why cant we help these people and help them keep their dignity. so sad.. thank you for writing it.. Everyone needs to help.. everyone.

I voted up and beautiful

Happy new Year Frank.

Debbie


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

Thank you Cara for reading and thank you Our Ms Brooks for your comment.. bless you both


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phdast7 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Extremely well done. Sensitive, truthful how poignant to speak from the inside looking out. Impressive, withgreat emotional impact.


V Qisya 4 years ago

Wow, great job, Frank. Simply awesome! Loved it.

Up, and away!

Best Wishes, Verita


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Vivid descriptions, interesting choice of expression and very thought provoking sentiments.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks again PH.. and V.. thank you for your comment and VG always good to see you


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Very intense poem of how the homeless people must many times feel. Up, awesome and had to hit beautiful too as there isn't an exceptional button.


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

Susan you still are the best!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Intense, but so vivid in the description--and that really worked for me--Bravo


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

thanks again Audrey.. you are too cool :)


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Moms-Secret 4 years ago from Central Florida

I used to have a worry that money given would go to a vice so I would never give money but I would drive off, get some food, and drive back. It never really satisfied me because I knew that was only going to hold him over for a tiny while.

Do you like to put yourself in others shoes because you see a lot of it?

Many Blessings


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

Moms.. you are very perceptive.. :) thanks for visiting Frank


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Frank

Very powerful.

Voted up and away!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

Sue you are up and away.. that didn't sound too cool.. you are awesome..:)


Sueswan 4 years ago

Frank you are too kind. I am not complaining though. ;-)


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton Author

and you should not complain when the truth is out :) Frank


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LadyFiddler 2 years ago from Somewhere in the West

Hey Frankie i guess people like that really prefer that they are better off dead than being alive and suffering such fate.

Lovely illustration in your poetic words. I hope your fine all the way over there in Canada :)


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton Author

thank you so much lady

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