Tonight Is For Us ( A Short Introduction completed )

















My hand grazes yours and our fingers interlock.

Stopping the clock.


Irresistible allure. Nothing less.

Candlelit lace and cold sheets caress.


My lips pressing softly on your own, you respond with a moan.

Inviting my fingers to playfully roam.


Gently exploring your glistening skin…

teasing your senses through material so thin.

This is only the way we begin.


Kissing down the back of your neck, to the arch of your back.

In dedication to detail, I will not lack


Tasting every location that draws a reaction.

Discovering secrets of heightened sensation.


Your nails on my flesh are wounding in ecstasy,

while our dreams coexist with blissful reality


Clothing decreasing, heat on the rise.

Exploring hands wandering, tend to your thighs,

allowing the escape of mesmerized sighs


Surrender beneath my weight and sheets’ silken embrace,

as my lingering kiss drifts from your hips to your waist.

I'm giving in to your irresistible taste.

I have no intent of stopping before
every erogenous zone you possess is explored.

Each portion that my lips taste of you…
opens a gateway to pleasures anew.

I’ll give you my love, along with my lust
Close your eyes slowly, tonight is for us



© copyright Ben D.A 2011

Comments 31 comments

Brownpaperbaggirl 5 years ago

Beautifully sensual.


nameless 5 years ago

hmmm... very intricate.. very detailed, very beutiful. like i said im not good with word so its hard to beleive that this is this poem could be so magnificint.. :)


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia

this is the height of sizzling awesome imagery of true love-making ever captured in poetry!


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sarahowen 5 years ago from uk

you can make any young lady feel beautiful, great work


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

..........hot hot hot...........

:)


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essiheart 5 years ago from Chicago, IL

"Gently exploring your glistening skin…

teasing your senses through material so thin.

This is only the way we begin."

I'm in love with this poem. And all words in it. And all the feelings it made me feel.

:)


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Clearly you are not a figment of imagination but a very alive and sensuous young man, whatever burdens on your heart and mind! You capture the essence of sensuality beautifully.


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Elizabeth99 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

Well, well lucky girl lol ;) Very sexy!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Twilight, thank you very much for that


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

Erotic and lyrical without overstepping the mark. Excellent... I also am going to be looking at your hubs with great interest.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

:D

thanks Randy/Nikki


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

very descriptive. this poem is sexy and seductive!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean

Well that was a yummy little read; thank you.


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brightforyou 5 years ago from Florida

Ben, this is simply beautiful ~ lucky girl!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Agreed, and thank you very much

I never did look at sex as just sex

I have always seen it in a deep, emotional, erotic sense


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Poohgranma 5 years ago from On the edge

The suggestion and playing with words give passion to writing about making love. Just as any two people can have sex, most anyone can write about it. To spend time with your lover and describe it in detail that brings forth the sensual aspects, seducing the readers is where your strength shine through.

BTW, the high you can get from knowing people are reading and enjoying what you write, your control over their emotions bringing them to tears or laughter can be far more intoxicating than anything thing you've experienced under the influence. ;)


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thisismylife9123 5 years ago from Salt lake city, UT

The allure of the soft curves of the female form and the desire of making her your own are expressed in amazing detail. With poetic talent such as yours, I doubt that you are a very lonely person. >.< Don't worry. I spent my Valentine's day alone, too. It may not seem like it, but it hurts more than I let on. Beautiful work, sir.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

cant wait!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

This is now part 1 and 2

I didn't want to make 3 separate hubs each being so short, so I am simply adding parts onto the original, and updating the title of the hub

Part 3 coming soon, so look for it :D

Thanks, Nikki


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

nice! seductive. Where's part 1??!


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AngRose 5 years ago

LOL It's very easy to become addicted to Hubpages..>I wrote a hub about being a Hub pages stalker..it's addicting to come on and find comments and know people like your work. Nothing wrong with that, it's what keeps creative people creating!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Thanks so much. I find myself becoming obsessed with this website already. For years I have been posting my work on myspace, then facebook.

I got very little feedback, and felt like no one would ever notice me.

In 3 days, I have already gotten more feedback and comments and views than I ever had.


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AngRose 5 years ago

Wonderful imagery. Lets you know there is so much more to come, just a taste, whetting the appetite for more...more of your poetry as well. Very talented young man, keep writing!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Epigramman, your comments on my writing are incredibly flattering. Thank you so much for that. This is the first publicity my writings have ever seen and I was surprised how pleasant the criticism has been. :]

Nellieanna, thanks SO MUCH. Writing is my biggest passion, and seeing others read and enjoy it truly means a ton to me. I am amazed with some of the things people has said about my poems


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Your mastery with words is outstanding, Ben. I'm going to be watching your site! You will do well on HubPages is my prediction! You have already seduced some of HPs good writers to read and praise our work! Not bad for 2 days!! And for such a young person, too! But it is not dark. Just sensual. ;-)


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well you have the heart of a poet - and the mind of a genius (poetically speaking) .....


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

Thanks so much saddlerider. You give me confidence in my writing. And, honestly...Valentines Day is just another day. I just happened to be alone, and under the influence...haha

And, bellawriter, thank you very much :]


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

A young man should never be lonely, get out there and explore and have fun, there are lovely girls just waiting for you to read your amazing poems to them. Keep writing and stay positive.I was once a young man and I know where your coming from.

Valentines Day can bring on the blues for many of both sexes, it to in time will pass. Now get out and show your artistic side to the world.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Yes I know the feeling of being lonely! That is how some of my best work unravels. Great write and read! Encore....


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee Author

;] thanks I wrote it last night. Being lonely does wonders.


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Wow, very saucy! Voted up and sexy oops no sexy button

:(, So I guess Awesome and beautiful. super hot!!

smiles :)

bella

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