A Sweeten That Hurts | Poem

It was a pressure

That transited in a stream

Through a conveyor at its job

Reaching a goal for design

Whose burden arouses

And its notice spell pleasure

That cannot be denied

And worth most desire


Who can resist it power?

When it displays one’s wish

In a person of enjoyment

A delight to be ventured

A sensation as real as imagined

In its appearance even its fulfillment

When bliss, a name for its deed

In triggering to activeness



An embrace in joy to everyone

That can feel and imagine its value

Who can pin it to evil?

Only when it displays wickedly

Transporting another phase

Embedded in its interior

A program from its foundation

Encrypted for a foul


Its ends influence Vulgar

In all its sense as evil

Displaying an injure of all

That houses it for a pleasure

Now cornered for displeasure

Bringing pain and misery

To all at its disposer

A sweeten that hurts


Abba Elijah also known as elija_god (elijagod)

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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

thanks for the comment DDE!


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A Sweeten That Hurts is a lovely poem with such great emotion.


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A great read and voted up.

Eddy.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Love sweets but I stick to chocolate pieces.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Sweets would be a pain for me, too, at the moment - I'm going to the dentist tomorrow. Some creative ideas in your poem.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Just like Eve, we eat the forbidden candy and wonder why? Clever and meaningful...


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kj force 2 years ago from Florida

abbaelijah..ahh. but this is made with real sugar, artificial sweetners are not used....as they are the uhealthiest of them all...the darker the chocolate the more desirable...nothing like a hand full of M&M's on a rainy day...This was a very " sweet " poem ..enjoyed every piece...kudos


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks Ocfireflies !

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it


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ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina

very interesting and creative, much enjoyed V+

Best,

Kim

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