That Blue Lagoons Of Life.

Freeverse : Riding On Each Horizon.

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Each enchanted horizon

witnesses each

ebb and flow

of a destiny

ours to claim

ours to caress.

The shores of our lives

soothed by

a mermaid's

magical healing potion.

Lapping onto the shores of yesteryear

of today

and

for every tomorrow's

sandy dune.

So warm

so heartfelt

so well rid

of each soul's piercing

self harming.

To bathe in

the waters of life

salt filled potion

heals and soothes

memories so painful.

pains so magnified

Horizons so evil

sinister

and filled with excruciating

pains from

that deep

and well hidden spirit.

Mermaids swim by

their stories to tell

their pains healed by

the lagoons of life

the waves magnetically draw

out each poison

so bent on

spreading the hurt

magnifying the pain

and

crushing

those hopes

riding

on each horizon.


Freeverse : Those Waves Of Love,

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However

waves of love

persist

sunshine's qualities soothe

echoing coves

crush each sound

no substance

to be replaced

by the joyous

echoes of love.

Waters flow and heal

heal and flow

caress each wounded pride

encouraging each beauty

no matter how small

no matter how strange.

We are victorious

as we trusted

in refreshing flowing tides

We cleansed our spirits from the Lagoon of Life



Rhyme : Each Heart Full Of Love.

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Shimmering waters

Seagulls hovering;

Calming outlook

An aura enchanting.

x

These waters resting

Each heart full of love;

Sublime free of trepidation

The flight of a dove.

x

An air full of essence

A potion called 'True Love';

Mesmerised heavens

Yes each home up above.

x

To sit here so tranquil

Rested and contented;

Inspiration a-flowing

Solitude so wanted.

x

To head for home

With a heart so full;

Shimmering waters

Love song soulful.



Rhyme : The Blue Lagoon.

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Calming waters rest

Magnetic evolution

Rest weary spirits.

x

The Blue Lagoon

Heartfelt and wondrous

Emotions so raw.



Freeverse : An Artist Of Life,

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Like an artist

who tries to breathe life

each painting amazing

emotions so wondrous

so breathtaking.

Magical moments that triggers

such embracing echoes

in the

viewers

or

readers

minds.

Love filled balloons

lovingly

filled

with peace

and

enchantment

wondrous emotions

so beautiful

being

carried high

on the breeze

of time.


Freeverse : Wondrous Love Song.

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Caress

a new found freedom

likened to the awesome flight of a balloon

never to be connected to those

anchors

so bleak

so forbidden !!

To soothe

to rise

so freely

a tune rising

on a white dove's

soft flight.

Each heart

connected to

an orchestral like

mission.

To free each wounded heart

to enhance a love

plucked so tenderly

on the chords of an eternal love song.


Freeverse : Eternal Enchantment.

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Eternal and enchanting

each wondrous shooting star

darting to and fro with

a spring like passion

an emtion

to draw in

to compel

to persevere.

Each of Cupid's arrows

so tenderly

so gently

piercing

the surface

being

so eager

so ready

so willingly.


Freeverse: Hearts Pulsating.

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A heart pulsating

in a fashion

of true perseverance

until each

and

every willing heart

so rightly

owns its place

in these

enchanting

waters

of life

of love

in eternal and flowing

magic.



Acrostic : Blue Lagoon.

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Blue Lagoon

Lovers in sweet surrender

Under that moon of love

Eternally true

x

Liaisons some furtive

Air so sweet and contented

Gather round my heart I share

Over each barrier.

Onwards with a determination

Never ending songs of love

Rhyme : Follow Your Heart.

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Follow your heart

Each ebb and flow.

A story of healing

Ture love will grow.


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starstream 3 years ago from Northern California

I am lost for words. This is an awesome work of art. The photos are lovely. It reads like a word video. I have always loved blue lagoons and was blessed to visit many in my teen years with my family. My favorite was Tahiti and surrounding islands. This brings back memories. I will save it to reread. Of course it could be divided into several pieces or articles. Thanks for sharing it.


JThomp42 3 years ago

So,so beautiful Eddy!! Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Eddy I think I want to be a mermaid.. lol ....you protray it so beauitful and wonderful... Many blessings my sweetest friend from Wales.. another beauty here but of course I wouldnt expect any less from you

sharing

debbie


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starstream 3 years ago from Northern California

Can I be a mermaid too? Blue Lagoon poetry is beautiful.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much starstream ;each and every comment is always so greatly appreciated. Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Jeff your words are always so kind and caring

.Have a wonderful day .

Eddy.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Wow I give you here a standing ovation.These different pieces are awesome and profound .You have a wonderful spirit-filled life.I voted up

Your brawd

James


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Oh Debbie thank you for such a wonderful comment.

Here's to wish you a great day.

Lots of love

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

I am sure we can manage that ha ha!!!!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you brawd for your wonderful comment. It is so positive and also so very appreciated.

Have a great day

Eddy.


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Daisy Mariposa 3 years ago from Orange County (Southern California)

Eddy,

Wow! Thanks for sharing this very impressive piece, this work of art, with us.


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carol7777 3 years ago from Arizona

I always love your poetry and am amazed at the perfect photos. VOting up and pinning.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

So very nice! And with the pictures of sandy beaches, turquoise water you take me out of the snow and cold that still persist here in Ottawa!

Great hub! Voted up and awsome!


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Phyllis Doyle 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

Eddy, how perfectly wonderful to step into the magical, mystical land of healing and love. What beautiful poetry that tempts, tantalizes, and welcomes the soul to places peace.

I must read this hub again and often, for, it really took me to another realm where there is no stress or daily frustrations. Thank you!

Up, Awesome, Beautiful


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Eddy, so very beautiful.

Wonderful imagery in the magic of your words.

DJ.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Daisy ;your comments are always greatly appreciated. Have a great day and you are so welcome.

Eddy.;


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you as always carol and have a great day yourself.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

I am so glad you enjoyed this one kidscraft and here's to so many more for us both toshare onhere.Have wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Phyllis your comment is so beautiful and I can assure you also greatly appreciated. Here's to a wonderful day for you.,

Take care

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much indeed DJ and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Eddy, you have an artists mind and imagination and view of life. Everything you see you can paint with your words and it is a pleasure to read the words of a poet who is at the top of her game. Well done my friend.

Sending love from Olympia

billy


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Suzie HQ 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Hi Eddy,

This was just a simply stunning piece of art on another level.You continue to amaze me, each poem I read i think it is the best and then you produce another and another . . .This is truly the work of a gifted talented lady who, as BB mentioned is truly at the top of her game! Congrats on a beautiful lyrical journey with such descriptive photos, everything works as one.

Voted Up, Awesome, Interesting, Shared & Pinned.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much as always my dear friend.

Your comments are always greatly appreciated and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Suzie for this wonderful comment. It means more than I can say and is so greatly appreciated. Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Have a great day.

Eddy..


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Senoritaa 3 years ago

This collection is so awe-inspiring Eddy. I always learn so much from you!


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jonmcclusk 3 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

Such beautiful images to go with the graceful flow of these poems. Great writing, Eiddwen, filled with emotion and passion!


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radhikasree 3 years ago from Mumbai,India

The flow of the poem together with the lovely imagery is commendable. Voted up, beautiful and interesting. Sharing across.


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vocalcoach 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Eddy - sweet friend -

I bow to your poetic genius pouring from your lovely heart. "To bathe in

the waters of life

salt filled potion

heals and soothes

memories so painful.

pains so magnified" ...

Your lingering words combined with visual magnificence is a very touching combination.

I am alive! Hugs, Audrey


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Your beautiful poems are so enchanting !

Well done !


Joanne M Olivieri 3 years ago

Eddy, your writing has me seeing poetry and words with a new and inspirational flavor. You bring nature to us in a new light and your talent is second to none. Love these.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

A Piscean dream--water everywhere!


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Gail Meyers 3 years ago from United States

Such a beautiful poem and with beautiful pictures. You are amazingly talented, Eddy.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

How do you do it day after day?

I love each piece of poetry

Please don't ever go away..

Hugs...


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Lagoons, and water, are healing entities. Thanks for sharing, Eddy, and passing this around.


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

These are poetic gems Eddy. So much depth, it's awesome. A sheer delight to read.

Voted up/awesome/shared.


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

These are so beautiful, the rhyming verse, the acrostic and the free verse were all excellent, enjoyed reading and voted up.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Point Reyes! Surely you have kissed there. Where the water meets the white sand before disappearing into the Pacific.


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Standing Ovation here.......such a nice collection of profound poems here. You are just awesome in every single piece of perfection. Thank you very much for these wonderful collection. God bless you. Shared and voted up.


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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

So well done Eddy. Another lovely start to my day.

Graham.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Eddy...

how do you create such tantalizing poems? They're really great.


Sannel 3 years ago

Eddy, I cannot put into words how much I love this stunningly beautiful collection of poems of yours. . . wow! Your words reads like a beautiful painting. Brought back some beautiful memories of Greece, too.

Thank you!

Sannel


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

I felt a part of your poetry here my friend. The waves washed over my soul as I listened to them crashing on the shores, watching the gulls overhead and wanting to swim with the mermaids to great depths forevermore. I lingered here awhile tasting the salty air on my tongue and felling the ocean breezes caress my cheek. Oh how magnificent these words are here, the power of them are as true as the stars and moon that hover above the crystal blue oceans of time. Thank you for sharing such beauty with us.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Eddy, magical!.... what a beautiful way to escape the mundane.

Loved it.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so mcuh to

VELLUR

SENORITAA

GRAHAM

MICHELLES

AUDREY

KASHMIR

RUBY

GAIL

JOANNE

RADHIKASREE

JONMCCLUSK

UNKNOWN SPY

SANNEL

RAJAN

VINCENT

TOBU

DGHBRH

for each and every wonderful comment .

Each one means so very much ;more than I can say.

I wish you all a wonderful day.

Lots of love

Eddy.


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

MMMMmmmmm...a SEA of emotion here, Eddy!

Hope, love, despair, wonder - an OCEAN of turmoil, calm, and depth!

I have a huge respect for the ocean - and for your talent - which is at HIGH TIDE, my dear friend!

voting up and sharing on..

Have a great day!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Hiya Leslie my brilliant friend. I have great respect for you;your forthrigh manner and powerful stance!!

Keep them all coming ;inspiration flows freely.

Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Mr Archer 3 years ago from Missouri

Eddy, this is simply stunning. ? You are an amazing talent. Thank you for blessing us with your words.


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Fossillady 3 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

You post such beautiful images with your lovely musings Eddy,

Follow your heart

Each ebb and flow.

A story of healing

True love will grow.

Hmmmm....

Kathi :O)


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CMCastro 3 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

What can I say- This is very Beautiful!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much for this great comment Fossillady and have a a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much CMCastro and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

Loving the sea as I do you had me from the beginning. Swept up by your words and carried along the waters of our emotions I was enchanted all the way through. You truly are a blessing Eddy.

Sending you Angels and more Angels today :) ps


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much PS and here's to so many more for us both to share.

Have a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Eddy, this is so colorful and beautiful. The blue lagoons of life.... I love it!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment Shauna and here's wishing you a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

A detailed piece of art. I especially liked the free verses, flowing and full of energy. Fab.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Eiddwen...Beautiful words of description on the varied levels of life..The freedom of no restraints on us as humans...very well written..so sayeth a human born water sign....

awesome write...thanks


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so much Anna and as always so greatly appreciated.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Your words means so much kj and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here. Have wonderful day.

Eddy.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

I compare the reading of this poetry as thrilling as a visiti to Disneyland! The enchantment is all there! Beautifully done!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Oh thank you so much Dianne and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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tebo 3 years ago from New Zealand

A beautiful expose of poems. You do have a wonderful way with words. These poems flow so beautifully, and I loved the glorious photos that you included.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Your comment so appreciated.

Have a great day.

Eddy.


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CMCastro 3 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

Had to come back and read again!! You beat me to it- I had been working on my ideas about Mermaids too; How can I do it differently? You have caught my eyes and my heart again with such whimsical harmony and loveliness. Thank you for the inspiration.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very mcuh CMC for returning to read again and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Eddy.


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Pinkchic18 3 years ago from Minnesota

Makes me want to go to the ocean. Very nice hub!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much Pinkchic 18 and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

.Eddy.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Eddy, beautifully done, inspirational, relaxing and very enjoyable.

Simply awesome.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales Author

Thank you so very much tobu and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

Have a great day .

Eddy.

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