A Woman So Beautiful

The Mystery She Wears

A wonderful surprise so shocking to my eyes

She has the shape that is curved and tappered

All in black and shiny

A forbidden fruit in the land of plenty

My mind races to unmentional places

As sexy as she is she has class and charm

I can't wait till hold her in my arms

She is smart as a whip and bold

Her hair dances freely down her face

A sensuous night before us will unfold

My eyes to curious to blink not knowing what may happen next

My breath hot and heavy

My chest beating steady

Wait a minute as I run to the shower to get ready

Comments 15 comments

KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Wow, a lovely poem.

Well, she sounds like a dream lady! I love how you ended it with your sentence:

'Wait a minute as I run to the shower to get ready'

It keeps me smiling. Voted up :-)

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alisha4u 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

Beautiful poetry !! Good going

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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

Dream On,

I like this poem, but... you leave me wanting to know what happens after you shower...

Ciao...Princess Prisca

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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

KatrineDalmonte a night of romance and passion awaits.I have to make sure I look my best.alisha4U It is easy when you have someone beautiful waiting.PrincessPrisca I can't see the bathroom got all fogged up.Nellieanna What a night!!!Thanx everyone for reading.

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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

So very beautiful and thanks for sharing.

Take care


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Dream on, very nice.

"a forbidden fruit in the land of plenty" very nice.

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dl53acy 4 years ago from East Texas

So elegantly sensual Dream On! I love it! :) Voting Up!

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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Kept me reading for sure!! Passion and anticipation....aren't they great?!Vote up!

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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia

Sounds too exciting!

A wonderful poem that leaves itself wide open to the imagination, well done :)

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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Eiddwen I a glad you liked it.cleaner3 I will keep trying to surprise and shock.dl53acy Nice to see you.picklesandrufus A one two punch that leaves you stunned.nighthag Less said is sometimes better.Thanx everyone for reading and sharing where fantasy and fun become one.

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Charlu 4 years ago from Florida

Yowzaaa How blessed a man you are to have the one who inspires such a sensation-able amount of bliss to your life and if that wasn't the ability you have to share it with us is beyond words. Thank you for sharing that which is so dear to your heart.

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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Charlu I just want you to know I thanked my wife first.Without her I would be watching t.v.Life is always a twist.Some days I say please lets do it again I insist!Thank you very much for enjoying.

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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

This was so lovely . I didnĀ“t expect to find a giggle at the end. I should have known.

You are awesome.

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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick Only one short giggle.Back to the drawing board.I expected at least a chuckle and then a belly laugh.Thanx for sharing my fun times.

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