The day when I was left alone

When I see back

The day when,

I was left alone.

Everyone around me ,

was there for me.

But no one I found like him.

every happiness was apart

My heart depart,

He did not care

True mates must be rare.

My feelings were fallen,

My eyes were sowllen,

Everyone around me cared .

His shoulder were spared

MY EMOTIONS COLLAPSE!!!!!!

just when,

I remember the day when I was left alone..

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Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

Love is fleeting. True love is hard to find, but there is one who offers to us never-ending unconditional love and even if you do not know him, he is waiting to introduce himself to you.


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Suprabha Raorane 5 years ago from mumbai,india Author

I believe that practically thinking has taken over the place of unconditional love and I know there is no one waiting now!!!!But when you acutually love that person years pass but you cant forget him/her??


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Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

Suprabha Raorane: I guarantee to you that there is right now at this very second, someone within inches of you even closer who is willing and desiring to offer to you total commitment of unconditional love, someone who will never stop loving you no matter what, all you have to do is ask. I will tell you how to recognize them if and when you are ready for such a love.


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Suprabha Raorane 5 years ago from mumbai,india Author

Dave how to do that??


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What Is Q 5 years ago from Tennessee

There's a lot of emotion in this poem. I appreciate the feeling you put into it. Thanks for sharing. Love is sometimes hard to find, and sometimes it leaves when we believe we've found it. Don't give up on true love, though. Practical thinking isn't a bad thing, but we have to follow our heart in some cases, even if the mind gets in the way. I wish you the best.

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