A love so strong

I am caught in this wonderful trap.

Entranced in the spell you placed on me.

I never want this to end.

You have me captivated so deeply.

One glance from you blows me away.

I would literally do anything for you.

I would take a bullet any day.

Just to feel your touch, gives me such a rush.

You are my drug.

I am intoxicated by your love.

Just hope it is not poison with a sweet taste.

I wouldn't believe it for a second anyway.

I have never cared for someone so deeply.

A love like this is hard to come by.

You are the love of my life I know it is true.

My life would be nothing without you.


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kirutaye 5 years ago from London, UK

Entrancing, intoxicating

Oh to be loved so deeply...

Thank you for sharing. :o))


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ghomefitness 5 years ago from Chicago,IL

Great poem and it is cool to see someone your age like Lita.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Wonderful words and you are so clearly in love. Awesome.


TattoGuy 5 years ago

Never heard that Ozzy song but it so goes with your poem and well your love shines right thru it. Your poems take me back to a time when I was in love, as in my poem 77 Days, when I log on now yours is the first page I go to as I now have you on my profile.

You really have blossomed in the last year, you and Acaetnna are so alike btw in your poems, just beautiful Chrissie x

Ps - Love your taste in music, I had never heard of Lita Ford, shes amazing !


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much!! That makes me smile! :) and I am so glad you finally heard this song!! Its one of my favs by ozzy and yea Lita is awesome great guitar player :D


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blondey 5 years ago

I feel the same way, but it's complicated. Easy to get hurt when you're already head over heels..sometimes I wonder what it all means...oh I like your choice of songs..I've been stuck in the 70's, :)


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

lol thanks glad you enjoyed the song I think music is so strong matched with a poem and vice versa i love sharing music I love with people as well as my writing.

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