A powerful woman


This is a poem i have written called A powerful woman. It is not about a body builder (?), or weightlifter (?) or anything like that but just about a sexy, powerful woman as she fixes herself in the mirror making sure she is looking as good as she can be

A powerful woman




She looked in the mirror. Intently.

Did she like what she sees. Today most definitely

Looking good.

Sometimes maybe not so much, but today yes

She impressed herself

She would impress him.

Her eyes, her face, her lips, her body

Put on her coat

Pulled it tight. Too tight.

Felt good, powerful, sexy

Oh yes really sexy

Said goodbye to herself in the mirror

Blew herself a kiss

And walked triumphantly out.

I own today she thought to herself

I look great and feel it

Oh yes I own today.


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thougtforce 5 years ago from Sweden

You have pictured one of those good moments that is a woman's best way to face a date or a day. Those moments are so good! To own today:) Great!

Tina


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Lady Wordsmith 5 years ago from Lancaster, UK

Yeah, I say this to myself every day ;) Only kidding. Sometimes I say it though. Do men not have days like this then?


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks a lot for your comments thoughtforce. Glad you liked it. Michael.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks for the comment Linda. Yes, the female version was just an idea i had, but i may now have to do a male version as well!!

Cheers. Michael.


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Lady Wordsmith 5 years ago from Lancaster, UK

Well, it will be interesting to see how that differs :) I'll keep an eye out for it!

Lx.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Yes i'll try and do something with it Linda, but just at this moment i think i will be as intrigued as yourself as to how it turns out. Michael.


kimberlyslyrics 5 years ago

Keep em coming

bravo

Kimberly and thank you


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks a lot kimberly.

Michael.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

This was very clever Michael. Always a great moment when one is really satisfied that one looks good!


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks a lot acaetnna.


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blondey 5 years ago

Nice words. Like the self confidence like a female tiger.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks a lot blondey.

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