A question of detection


A question of detection


A question of detection.

Can your brain stand this inspection

The knowledge from within your mind

is what i need to find.


All the things i ask.

Do i put you to task?

To know you is my quest

and i will do my best.


To invigorate the soul

and the spirit as a whole

Find the beauty from within

and let your life begin.


The answers that i seek

make me feel so weak

Cut out all your strife

and go forward in this life.


The you beneath your locks

and the you beneath your frocks

is the one to really see

and for you to really be.


The feeling that you're giving

is that life is for living

Surround yourself with action

and no more distraction.


So with your fire and passion

and real talk discussion

Empty the emptiness

and be a life of wonder.




Comments 6 comments

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mkrandhawa 5 years ago from India

Well knitted hub.Good job.


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FloraBreenRobison 5 years ago

"Empty the emptyness." Profound.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks a lot mkrandhawa


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Thanks Flora


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CheyenneAutumn 5 years ago

Very well done - how could one resist a reply...


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland Author

Nice to see you on here again Laurie. Hope you liked it..

Michael.

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