A Legend Comes Home (limerick)

He found himself kissing life’s shore

His clothes wore the glories he bore

And as his soul sunk

He yearned for his bunk

He’ll not get that drunk anymore


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Been there, done that, many times.


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chepkoluumugulel 4 years ago from Texas

Awesome. I always enjoy your limericks!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I am glad that sobered him up.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

me, too, billy, me, too. Thankfully, it has been awhile. Well done mhatter!


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barbergirl28 4 years ago from Hemet, Ca

I felt like this... a lot... occasionally... ok.. i can relate! Well done once again!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

That's adorable. So cute. Well done! Love it. Many votes!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum... or several in this case, don't envy his hang over. Well done as usual.


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Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

I've got to watch what I drink!


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What a fate! That last hangover... LOL


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

smiles* awesome!


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Me, Steve Walters 4 years ago from The Big

Good One!


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Julie DeNeen 4 years ago from Clinton CT

Nicccceeee....


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Love your poem,so little but said so much !

Vote up and more !!!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Feeling THAT kind of pain!


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

Hangover has never been so elegantly expressed. Marvelous!


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stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

I could use a good hangover . God Bless you. Great poem.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Wouldn't want to be him when hangover time comes sailing in.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Whew, been there....you took me back!!


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Wow! One night of fun can turn into a world of trouble.

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