A Lover’s Stroll (limerick)

He never saw sky quite so blue

The air filled with smell that was new

A soft squishy sound

Was coming from ground

His feet were confounded in poo


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And the moral of the story is to watch where you tread. I do that every day when I head to the park for photos, keep a sharp eye out.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Ha,ha, ha. Although, with such a elated view -- I guess even a little poo wouldn't interfere with the happiness.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

It came from the ground and not from him?


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You have done it once more! You are still the King of Limericks!


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travmaj 4 years ago from australia

This really brightened up my day - thank you.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

HAHA, I loved this one buddy! What a gross feeling! :)


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Good one! Sounds like some of the trailrides I went on when it was raining!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Mh -

Absolutely hilarious!

Why do I feel like I'm back in my Grandfather's cow pasture? By the way, did you know the best fishing worms are found underneath a semi dry cow pile? It's amazing what fish will eat.

Great Job, my friend! Loved it!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Yes, the universe is awesome, but there is nothing like standing in a pile of poo to bring one down to earth.

Love your wicked side.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I'm still laughing..You are so good at this type of poetry..


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Oh my! I can smell it! I hope it was bullsh@t and not human....

Lol!


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Glimmer Twin Fan 4 years ago

Another great laugh with a little bit of head shaking.


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Haha! didn't see that bit coming! really funny!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol Oh yes the walk across the field only to discover the cow patties. Fantastic.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

too funny! Makes me think of that song that starts with"when you're sliding into first and you feel a juicy burst... diarrhea,diarrhea.....

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