A Nature Boy I (limerick)

Dad took me where animals roam

Uncharted were path we would comb

As nights would pass by

I’d see my dad cry

I kept finding my way back home


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awordlover 2 years ago

I check every day to see what limerick you have come up with. Love them!


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bravewarrior 2 years ago from Central Florida

This reminds me of the classic Hanzel and Gretel!


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

lol..breadcrumbs??


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grand old lady 2 years ago from Philippines

I love this. It tells stories within a story. Voted up and it dwells in my heart and mind right now.


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Boomerang boy!


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

Thanks for another great limerick!

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