A Person Drowned (tanka)

The lake was peaceful

The day that he took his life

Drowning in waters

A person others once knew

As he rose to meet his day


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billybuc 19 months ago from Olympia, WA

A complete story in five lines. Not an easy thing to do. Well done, Martin!


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bravewarrior 19 months ago from Central Florida

Wow. Pretty powerful, Martin!


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Minnetonka Twin 19 months ago from Minnesota

Sad but Great job on the tanka poetry. You got so much information in so few lines.

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