A Picture A Moment (tanka)

There in a picture

Was a face I’d never seen

Staring back at me

Waiting for this one moment

When I could finally see


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Awesome! Lovely picture.

Voted up ++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Beautiful words my friend. Are those your kids?


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

They certainly look like siblings. Beautiful ones.


Joanne M Olivieri 3 years ago

As always, fantastically creative. Voted up!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99..WOW...NWN...


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Sometimes we never really see who we are. Intriguing poem, Martin.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Mh, your words of mystery capture my curiosity.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Beautiful Martin;thanks for sharing.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Sometimes one doesn't always "see" objectively.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is deep, I have to ponder this one..Cheers...


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

kids grow up - right before our eyes..

beautiful kids..

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